Review of Performance Poet’s Association Winners

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Recently I received a copy of the Performance Poet’s Association 26 Annual Literary Review as a prize for my participation in the annual Poetry Super Highway 2024 contest.

Over the last five years, I have received copies of

Buckley’s “In January, the Gesse”,  Rio Cortez’s “ I Have Learned to Define a Field as a Space Between Mountains”, Christopher Micahel “Nuclear Orange Cupid is the Devil:, and Wade Riddle “The Power of Summer” and “Chocolate Man” and the classic book, William Trevor, “Fools of Fortune.”

For those of you have not entered this contest, the contest opens in the summer and ends around October 1, 2024. They also offer a daily prompt during the April Poetry madness month.  The web page is

The web page is Poetry Super Highway Exposing Poetry to as Many People As Possible

The FB page is (20+) Poetry Super Highway | Facebook

You can enter five poems for 5 dollars = reprints are okay. All participants receive a book of poetry. It is an excellent way of building up a poetry library and reading recently published poetry gives you an insight into what type of poetry are being published these days. For that reason I buy the annual Poetry anthology, most recently for 2023, 2024 is not yet available so I bought the Penguin Anthology of 20^th Century poetry which is next on my poetry reading list. I also every day read and review poems published on Writng com and Fan Story.  I wrote reviews of these books  here

Review of Waide Riddle Power of Summer

For this review, I picked the following five poems out of 91 in the collection, for a close read and analysis. .,..

1. Anne Coen “My Father’s Hands” – paired with “Old Man in the Mirror”

2. Peter A Dugan “The Modern Cinderella” Cinderella’s Revenge new poem using a found poem technique.

3. Daniel Keer “A Jackass Riding a Donkey “ paired with “Trump’s Revenge” based on found poem techniques using Trumps’ calls for retribution and fighting the enemy within new poem

This poem is very interesting it starts out as a pro-Biden poem then morphs into a pro-Trump poem and condemns Wokeism as similar to the Chinese cultural revolution, which of course it is not.  While I disagree with the political theme of this poem, I admire the skill it which is is penned.

4. Robert Mc Kenna “the Naked and the Nude” paired with “One Night In Bangkok:

5. Andrea Sinnott “And Then Came COVID-19” paired with Haiflu poem

6. Barbera Southhard “conversation with the cat paired with “Cosmic Cat from Berkeley”.

For each poem, I typed the text, and then paired it with one of my poems written as a response to or commentary to the poem I chose to focus on.

I then asked Co-Pilot to analyze the poems using the following standard criteria

Please analyze the following poems indicating meter, if any, poetic techniques used, diction, sounds, theme, tone, word count, syllable count by line, (spell out each line indicating syllable, word count per line, poetic schools, and influences. Please note the second poem is my poetic response to the first poem, and note any similar poetic techniques used or similar themes..

And included the analysis of each poem.

Anne Coen. My Father’s Hands.

When I close my eyes, I remember my father’s hands.

Sturdy and strong.

Long fingered.

Prominently veined.

Leaving their impact in the various projects.

Still visible throughout my childhood home.

I love keeping him company

As he painted, Wallpapered, hammered and sawed.

We spend hours listening to recordings.

Of old radio broadcasts as he worked.

Here’s where the hands that taught me.

To light a match.

Drive a nail.

And eventually drive a car.

As a young lady I became self-conscious of my large thick veined hands.

I tried to hide them until a stranger remarked in their beauty.

Beuuty! I spluttered.

Yes, Beauty.

Those hands have power in them.

Those hands are the hands of artists.

Today. I looked down on my hands:

Sturdy and strong,

Long fingered.

Prominently vain.

And with gratitude.

See my father.

 

Meter

The poem does not follow a strict meter, but it has a free verse structure with varying syllable counts and line lengths.

Poetic Techniques

• Imagery: The poem uses vivid imagery to describe the father’s hands and their impact.
• Repetition: The phrases “Sturdy and strong,” “Long fingered,” and “Prominently veined” are repeated for emphasis.
• Alliteration: Phrases like “painted, wallpapered” and “keeping him company” employ alliteration.
• Symbolism: The father’s hands symbolize strength, craftsmanship, and artistry.
• Personification: The hands are given life and character through the descriptions.
• Enjambment: Many lines flow into the next without a pause, creating a sense of continuity.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: The diction is simple, direct, and evocative, creating a vivid picture of the father’s hands and their significance.
• Sounds: The poem uses soft, consonant sounds to evoke a sense of tenderness and admiration.

Theme

The primary theme is the enduring impact of a parent’s influence, symbolized by the father’s hands. It explores themes of legacy, admiration, and self-acceptance.

Tone

The tone is nostalgic, reverent, and introspective, reflecting on the father’s influence and the speaker’s journey to self-acceptance.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “When I close my eyes, I remember my father’s hands.”
  • 13 syllables, 11 words
• “Sturdy and strong.”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Long fingered.”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “Prominently veined.”
  • 5 syllables, 2 words
• “Leaving their impact in the various projects.”
  • 11 syllables, 8 words
• “Still visible throughout my childhood home.”
  • 10 syllables, 7 words
• “I love keeping him company”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “As he painted, wallpapered, hammered and solid.”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “We spent hours listening to recordings.”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “Of old radio broadcasts as he worked.”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “Here’s where the hands that taught me.”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “To light a match.”
  • 4 syllables, 4 words
• “Drive a nail.”
  • 3 syllables, 3 words
• “And eventually drive a car.”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “As a young lady I became self-conscious of my large thick veined hands.”
  • 18 syllables, 16 words
• “I tried to hide them until a stranger remarked in their beauty.”
  • 16 syllables, 13 words
• “Beauty! I spluttered.”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “Yes, Beauty.”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “Those hands have power in them.”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “Those hands are the hands of artists.”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “Today. I look down on my hands:”
  • 8 syllables, 7 words
• “Sturdy and strong,”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Long fingered.”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “Prominently veined.”
  • 5 syllables, 2 words
• “And with gratitude.”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “See my father.”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words

Old Man in the Mirror Must Die

Early one  winter morning
An old man woke up to do his morning shave
Just another shave
Like a thousand, million shaves before.

As he looked into the mirror
He did not see his face
Instead he saw a stranger
Staring out at him.

An old, beat up old man
With intense sad eyes
Stared out at him.

The man looked hard
At the man who had taken
Over his mirror.

And wondered who he was
And how and why
He had taken over his mirror.

The man was perturbed, disturbed
And a bit angry at the turn of events
All he wanted to do
Was shave in peace and quiet.

The man continued to stare
At the face in the mirror
And finally could not stand it anymore.

He looked at the mirror
And said,

“Man in the mirror
Who or what are you
And what do you want
And why have you taken over
My god damned mirror
So early in the morn?”

The old man
Merely laughed and resumed staring
At the man.

The man getting more and more angry
Demanded an answer
From the fiend in the mirror.

Who are you, you mocking fiend
And what do you want from me
The man screamed.

The old man in the mirror
Looked at him and said

“Don’t you know who I am ?
I am you and you are me”

The man looked at the old man
And said

“no, no, no
I am not you, never will be you
I am not an old, washed up old man
I am me – full of life, youth and vitality”

And yet the man knew the truth
Did not want to admit the truth
Could not handle the truth
The old man in the mirror
Was what he had become.

The man was very angry
And screamed
At the old man in the mirror

“The man said you may look like me
You may sound like me
You may even smell like me

But I am not you
Never have been
Never will be
Not going to happen
Not in a million years”

The man yelled at the old man
“Old man, mocking fiend from hell
Go to hell old man
And never darken my mirror again”

And the man stormed out of the house
And wandered about here and there
Finally late at night
He wandered into a bar
And began drinking the night away.

The man went up to some pretty young things
And tried to pick them up
They laughed at him
Called him a dirty old man
And told him to go home.

The man went home
To bed alone
And drank some more beer
And dreamt of all of his past loves
And failed dreams.

Of what he had done
And failed to do
And wondered whether his time
Had come.

The next morning
He walked into the bathroom
Determined to confront the old man
Tell truth to power

“listen up

Old man
You may have won the war
But not the battle
I am not you
And never will be you”

And screaming like an escaped banshee
Newly freed from the mental institution
The man shot the old man in the mirror.

Shot him over and over
Screaming

“Die mocking fiend from hell.”

The man woke in the hospital
An old black doctor came over
Said sadly,

“This white boy ain’t right in the head”.

The man laughed insanely
And saw down the hall

The old man in the mirror
Smiling and beckoning to him
Walking out the window
And into the dawning sun

The man got up and walked
And joined the old man in the mirror
And smiled as he died

Analysis of “Old Man in the Mirror Must Die”

Meter

The poem does not follow a strict meter and is written in free verse, allowing for a natural flow of speech.

Poetic Techniques

• Repetition: The phrase “Old man, mocking fiend from hell” is repeated, emphasizing the disdain the speaker feels towards the old man.
• Direct Address: The speaker directly addresses the old man in the mirror, creating a confrontational tone.
• Imagery: The poem uses vivid imagery to depict the old man and the speaker’s reaction to him.
• Personification: The old man in the mirror is personified as a separate entity that the speaker can interact with.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: The language is straightforward and colloquial, reflecting the speaker’s frustration and anger.
• Sounds: The poem uses harsh consonant sounds (e.g., “mocking fiend from hell”) to convey the speaker’s animosity.

Theme

The primary theme is the internal struggle with aging and self-acceptance. The speaker confronts the old man in the mirror, symbolizing his fear and denial of aging.

Tone

The tone is aggressive and confrontational, reflecting the speaker’s anger and refusal to accept the reality of aging.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “The man yelled at the old man”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “Old man, mocking fiend from hell”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “Go to hell old man”
  • 5 syllables, 4 words
• “And never darken my mirror again”
  • 10 syllables, 6 words
• “And the man stormed out of the house”
  • 11 syllables, 7 words
• “And wandered about here and there”

  • 10 syllables, 6 words

• “Finally late at night”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “He wandered into a bar”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “And began drinking the night away”
  • 11 syllables, 7 words
• “The man went up to some pretty young things”
  • 14 syllables, 8 words
• “And tried to pick them up”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words

Poetic Schools and Influences

The poem can be categorized under contemporary free verse poetry, influenced by confessional poetry for its personal and introspective nature. The detailed imagery and focus on personal experience are reminiscent of poets like Sylvia Plath and Anne Sexton

Peter V Dugan, The  Modern Cinderella

She put up the third load.

Of laundry into the washer.

Begin to fold the clothes.

Taken from the dryer.

 

Later, she empties the dishwasher.

 

She remembers the night in the city.

Dining on French cuisine

And attending one of the most

“must see plays” on Broadway.

 

She knowsshe could be spoiled

Being one of the ” beuatiful people “.

.

So she sashays around the house

In her dressing robe doing her best

Bette Davis “I’m so bored, darling.”

 

Her husband sits quietly,

Reading the paper, sipping coffee

Ignoring her.

 

The Rest of the Story

 

.Maria Lee

Had had enough

Of the indifference

Of her husband

Of 40 years

 

Even since he retired

He has been so boring

 

And she could not recall

The last time

She made her cum

It had been so long.

 

She recalled when they were

A power couple

Twenty years ago,

 

Now they are just an old

Boring retired couple.

 

She was furious

Pulled out her gun

And shot her husband dead.

 

Screaming

 

“Pay attention to me!

I am not your slave

I am not one of your toys.

 

I am your wife

And we used to be lovers.’

 

When the police came

She told them

 

“I shot him

Because he is so boring

And I could not stand

The sight of him

 

Ignoring me

As a I danced

Half naked across the room.

Waiting for him to wake up

And notice me

 

Notice that I am still

A beuatiful sexy woman

And still need to be satisfied

As only a man can satisfy

His woman.”

 

She became a cause celebrite

So many old couples could relate

Did the celebrity TV circuit

Against her lawyer’s advice.

 

But she ended up

Getting 25 years

In prison.

Let’s analyze each poem separately, noting where they share similar poetic techniques.

“The Modern Cinderella” by Peter V. Dugan

Meter

The poem is written in free verse, without a strict meter.

Poetic Techniques

• Imagery: Vivid descriptions of household chores and memories of city life.
• Contrast: The mundane tasks of laundry and dishwashing are contrasted with the glamorous memories of dining and attending plays.
• Allusion: Reference to Bette Davis, adding a touch of drama and nostalgia.
• Irony: The title “Modern Cinderella” contrasts with the reality of the woman’s life.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: Simple and direct, reflecting the everyday nature of the tasks.
• Sounds: The poem uses soft consonant sounds to create a sense of routine and monotony.

Theme

The theme revolves around the contrast between mundane domestic life and the longing for past glamour and excitement.

Tone

The tone is reflective and slightly melancholic, with a touch of irony.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “She put up the third load.”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “Of laundry into the washer.”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “Begin to fold the clothes.”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “Taken from the dryer.”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “Later, she empties the dishwasher.”
  • 9 syllables, 5 words
• “She remembers the night in the city.”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “Dining on French cuisine”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “And attending one of the most”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• ““must see plays” on Broadway.”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “She knows she could be spoiled”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “Being one of the “beautiful people”.”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “So she sashays around the house”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “In her dressing robe doing her best”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “Bette Davis “I’m so bored, darling.””
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “Her husband sits quietly,”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Reading the paper, sipping coffee”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “Ignoring her.”
  • 4 syllables, 2 words

“The Rest of the Story” by Maria Lee

Meter

The poem is written in free verse, without a strict meter.

Poetic Techniques

• Imagery: Descriptions of the husband’s indifference and the wife’s frustration.
• Direct Address: The wife directly addresses her husband and later the police.
• Irony: The wife’s drastic actions contrast with the mundane nature of her complaints.
• Allusion: Reference to their past as a “power couple.”

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: Direct and colloquial, reflecting the wife’s frustration and anger.
• Sounds: The poem uses harsh consonant sounds to convey the wife’s anger.

Theme

The theme revolves around the frustration and disillusionment of a long-term marriage, leading to a dramatic and violent resolution.

Tone

The tone is angry and confrontational, with a sense of desperation.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “Maria Lee”
  • 4 syllables, 2 words
• “Had had enough”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Of the indifference”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “Of her husband”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Of 40 years”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Even since he retired”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “He has been so boring”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “And she could not recall”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “The last time”
  • 3 syllables, 3 words
• “She made her cum”
  • 4 syllables, 4 words
• “It had been so long.”
  • 5 syllables, 5 words
• “She recalled when they were”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “A power couple”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “Twenty years ago,”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “Now they are just an old”
  • 6 syllables, 6 words
• “Boring retired couple.”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “She was furious”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Pulled out her gun”
  • 4 syllables, 4 words
• “And shot her husband dead.”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “Screaming”
  • 2 syllables, 1 word
• ““Pay attention to me!”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “I am not your slave”
  • 5 syllables, 5 words
• “I am not one of your toys.”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “I am your wife”
  • 4 syllables, 4 words
• “And we used to be lovers.’”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “When the police came”
  • 5 syllables, 4 words
• “She told them”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• ““I shot him”
  • 3 syllables, 3 words
• “Because he is so boring”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “And I could not stand”
  • 5 syllables, 5 words
• “The sight of him”
  • 4 syllables, 4 words
• “Ignoring me”
  • 4 syllables, 2 words
• “As a I danced”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Half naked across the room.”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “Waiting for him to wake up”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “And notice me”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Notice that I am still”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “A beautiful sexy woman”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “And still need to be satisfied”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “As only a man can satisfy”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “His woman.””
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “She became a cause celebre”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “So many old couples could relate”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “Did the celebrity TV circuit”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “Against her lawyer’s advice.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “But she ended up”
  • 5 syllables, 4 words
• “Getting 25 years”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “In prison.”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words

Shared Poetic Techniques

• Imagery: Both poems use vivid imagery to depict the characters’ lives and emotions.
• Irony: Both poems employ irony to highlight the contrast between appearance and reality.
• Direct Address: Both poems feature direct address, with characters speaking to others or themselves.
• Tone: Both poems have a reflective tone, though “The Rest of the Story” shifts to a more confrontational tone.

Poetic Schools and Influences

Both poems can be categorized under contemporary free verse poetry, influenced by confessional poetry for their personal and introspective nature. The detailed imagery and focus on personal experience are reminiscent of poets like Sylvia Plath and Anne Sexton

Daniel Keer A Jackass Riding A Donkey.

When it was time for him to complete his earthly mission,

Jesus Christ sent one of his disciples to fetch a young cult.

And the savior rode a donkey triumphantly into Jerusalem.

When it came time to save America from the evil orange man

The Democratic Party annoited Joe Biden.

And a Jackass  rode a donkey triumphantly into Washington.

 

As Christ rode into Jerusalem, the crowd cheered.

Blessed is he who comes in the name of the Lord.

Hosanna in the highest.

As Biden rode into Washington, the crowd cheered.

Blessed  is he who comes in the name of the party.

Wokedom in the highest.

 

Open the borders.

Cancel all who disagree.

Wokedom in the highest.

Kill the oil industry.

Teach our children to hate America.

Wokedom in the highest.

Nationalized elections

End the filibuster.

Wokedom in the highest.

Demonize the police.

Pack the Supreme Court.

Wokedom in the highest.

 

Somewhere in heaven.

George Washington and Abraham Lincoln are crying.

As their names are removed from schools in California.

Somewhere in hell.

Chairman Mao is smiling.

The Chinese Cultural Revolution has come to America.

 

Blessed is he who comes in the name of the party.

Wokedom in the highest.

Note:

This poem is very interesting it starts out as a pro-Biden poem then morphs into a pro-Trump poem and condemns Wokeism as similar to the Chinese cultural revolution, which of course it is not.  While I disagree with the political theme of this poem, I admire the skill it which is is penned; it is indicative of how MAGA supporters view Trump as being annointed by God to clean up the leftist communist meanance they see threathening the country. Factually he got a few things wrong – the Filibuster has not ened although there is talk about that, the Supreme Court has not been packed, although there are talk of that, and Yes, in California they removed the name of Washington and Lilcoln from schools because Washington owned slaves, and Lincoln well he was a racist and was promoting sending slaves back to Africa as his solution to the Negro problem post civil war. The reference to the Chinese cultural revolution is also a standard rightwing meme regarding “cancel” culture and “wokeism, and DEI iniatives.

My response poem is based on found poem techniques using Trumps’ calls for retribution and fighting the enemy within  new poem using newspapers accounts and his own words.

Trump’s Retribution Tour

Trump ran a campaign

based on retribution.

Now he is perfectly

positioned to carry it out.

 

Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah

 

From Joe Biden, Kamala Harris

to Hilary Clinton, Liz Cheney

Jack Smith and Mark Milley

 

And so many others

He has promised revenge

And retribution.

 

Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah

President Joe Biden

Trump has frequently called Biden corrupt

and, in June, reposted a Truth Social message

that said he should be “arrested for treason.”

 

Trump vowed: “I will appoint

a real special prosecutor

to go after the most corrupt President

in the history

of the United States of America,

Joe Biden, and the entire Biden crime family.

 

Comment: projection I think?

The kettle calling the pot black?

Pretty rich to come from a man

Whose son-in-laugh received

A two billion dollar pay off

Form the Saudis at the tail end

Of Trump’s term

 

But the Republicans never talk about that

It was all about Huner Biden’s 1 million dollars

In Burisma pay offs in Ukraine

 

The two things are not the same thing

At all. End Comment

”Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah

 

Vice President Kamala Harris

Trump has described Harris’ failure to control migration

as so severe that people have been

“murdered because of her

action at the border.”

Harris “should be impeached

and prosecuted” for her role

in permitting what he termed an

“invasion” of the U.S.

by undocumented immigrants.

Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah

 

Former Secretary of State Hillary Clinton

“Lock her up!” was a memorable refrain of Trump’s

2016 campaign rallies,

alluding vaguely

to Clinton’s use of a private email account

while secretary of state and the ensuing FBI investigation,

which did not lead to any charges.

 

Wouldn’t it be terrible

to throw the president’s wife

and the former secretary of state … into jail?”

It’s a terrible, terrible, path

that they’re leading us to

and it’s very possible

that it’s going

to have to happen to them.”

Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah

Former Speaker Nancy Pelosi

In September, Trump

said Pelosi should face criminal charges

in connection with her husband’s

sale of Visa stock a few months

before the Justice Department

sued the company for alleged antitrust violations.

 

In a speech Monday, Trump said Pelosi “

could’ve gone to jail

for” theatrically ripping up

a copy of Trump’s State of the Union address

while sitting behind him

on the House rostrum in 2020.

 

Comment:

While Pelosi dissed the President

What she did was perfectly legal

and not a crime.

 

Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah

Liz Cheney

 

In March, Trump declared on Truth Social that Cheney “

should go to jail.”

calling Cheney “guilty of treason.”

 

, Trump mused:

“Let’s put her with a rifle

standing there with nine barrels

shooting at her.”

He said he was accusing her

of hypocrisy for supporting

the war in Iraq.

Comment:

Again none of her actions are crimes

And do not rise to the level of treason.

End comment

Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah

 

Special Counsel Jack Smith

Smith “must go to prison.”

In August, Trump

reposted a message calling

“Jackal Smith … a career criminal”

and saying he “

should be prosecuted for election interference

and prosecutorial misconduct.

 

” Last month, appearing on a radio show,

Trump called Smith “mentally deranged”

and said he “should

be thrown out of the country.

 

Comment: none of Smith’s action are criminal

His own crime was to attempt

To hold the real criminal Trump

To account.

 

And more projection

a deranged man

Showing signs of Alzheimer’s

Calling his oponentes deranged

Classic Trump!!

End Comment

 

Former Chair of the Joint Chiefs of Staff Mark Milley

For more than three years,

Trump has railed against Milley,

claiming that the general’s contact

with a Chinese official

during the tense transition period

four years ago amounted to treason.

 

“This is an act so egregious

that, in times gone by,

the punishment would have been DEATH!”

Trump declared in a social media post last year.

The feud was reignited in recent days

after Milley called Trump “fascist to his core.

 

Comment:  Miley’s actions were legal and in accordance

With standard operating procedures

Not treasonous conduct

 

And Miley is right

Trump is a fascist to his core.

Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah

 

“People on Trump’s enemy list

Should be  concerned

that they could be audited by the IRS.

They could be the subject

of a bogus congressional investigation.

Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah

 

There may be even a way to conduct,

or at least initiate,

a bogus criminal investigation.

And all with the goal of, ironically,

for the first time actually

weaponizing the Department of Justice.”

Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah

Comment

“What they’ve done is bad,” Trump said.

Another example of projection

Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah

 

The FBI could easily find criminal misconduct

Following Beria’s famous line

Show me the man

And I will find the crime.

Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah

 

In the end all of Trump’s enemies

Especially those on the left

Should be afraid

Of the coming storm.

Including me for writing

This satirical poem

 

Will I end up in a camp?

I wonder…..

Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Me!

 

Based on the following source articles supplied by Co-Pilot.

https://abcnews.go.com/Politics/trumps-conviction-intensifies-calls-retribution-term/story?id=110927011

• Trump’s pick to lead FBI identified ‘Government Gangsters’: This article covers Kash Patel, Trump’s pick for FBI director, and his list of 60 people he deems members of the “Executive Branch Deep State,” which critics have dubbed an enemies list.
• Trump’s retribution is about to begin: This article outlines Trump’s campaign promises of retribution against his political opponents, critics, and members of the media, and how he plans to implement his platform of punishment.
• Donald Trump’s threats of retribution cause alarm among targets: This article highlights the renewed sense of alarm among those who have crossed paths with Trump, as he vows to seek revenge and assembles a team to carry out his plans.
• Trump vows revenge on enemies. These enforcers could carry that out: This article discusses Trump’s intentions to go after his enemies if elected, with the help of enforcers like Michael Flynn and Ivan Raiklin

 

“A Jackass Riding A Donkey” by Daniel Keer

Meter

The poem is written in free verse, without a strict meter.

Poetic Techniques

• Allusion: The poem alludes to the biblical story of Jesus riding a donkey into Jerusalem, drawing a parallel to Joe Biden’s election.
• Irony: The poem uses irony to contrast the perceived sanctity of Jesus’ mission with the political narrative of Biden’s election.
• Imagery: Vivid imagery is used to depict the scenes of Jesus and Biden riding into their respective cities.
• Repetition: The phrase “Wokedom in the highest” is repeated to emphasize the satirical tone.
• Juxtaposition: The poem juxtaposes religious imagery with political commentary.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: The language is straightforward and colloquial, with a mix of religious and political terminology.
• Sounds: The poem uses a mix of soft and harsh consonant sounds to create a rhythm that mirrors the contrast in themes.

Theme

The primary theme is the critique of modern political movements, particularly “wokeism,” and the perceived parallels to historical and religious events.

Tone

The tone is satirical and critical, with a hint of sarcasm.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “When it was time for him to complete his earthly mission,”
  • 13 syllables, 11 words
• “Jesus Christ sent one of his disciples to fetch a young cult.”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “And the savior rode a donkey triumphantly into Jerusalem.”
  • 13 syllables, 10 words
• “When it came time to save America from the evil orange man”
  • 13 syllables, 11 words
• “The Democratic Party annoited Joe Biden.”
  • 10 syllables, 6 words
• “And a Jackass rode a donkey triumphantly into Washington.”
  • 13 syllables, 10 words
• “As Christ rode into Jerusalem, the crowd cheered.”
  • 10 syllables, 8 words
• “Blessed is he who comes in the name of the Lord.”
  • 10 syllables, 11 words
• “Hosanna in the highest.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “As Biden rode into Washington, the crowd cheered.”
  • 10 syllables, 8 words
• “Blessed is he who comes in the name of the party.”
  • 10 syllables, 11 words
• “Wokedom in the highest.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Open the borders.”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “Cancel all who disagree.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Wokedom in the highest.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Kill the oil industry.”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “Teach our children to hate America.”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “Wokedom in the highest.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Nationalized elections”
  • 7 syllables, 2 words
• “End the filibuster.”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “Wokedom in the highest.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Demonize the police.”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “Pack the Supreme Court.”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “Wokedom in the highest.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Somewhere in heaven.”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “George Washington and Abraham Lincoln are crying.”
  • 10 syllables, 8 words
• “As their names are removed from schools in California.”
  • 11 syllables, 9 words
• “Somewhere in hell.”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “Chairman Mao is smiling.”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “The Chinese Cultural Revolution has come to America.”
  • 11 syllables, 8 words
• “Blessed is he who comes in the name of the party.”
  • 10 syllables, 11 words
• “Wokedom in the highest.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words

“Trump’s Retribution Revenge Tour” by [Your Name]

Meter

The poem is written in free verse, without a strict meter.

Poetic Techniques

• Found Poetry: The poem uses found poetry techniques, incorporating actual quotes and statements from Trump and news articles.
• Repetition: The phrase “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah” is repeated to emphasize the theme of fear and retribution.
• Direct Address: The poem directly addresses the reader, creating a sense of urgency and warning.
• Irony: The poem uses irony to highlight the absurdity and danger of Trump’s statements and actions.
• Commentary: The poem includes commentary on the quotes, providing context and critique.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: The language is direct and colloquial, with a mix of political and conversational terminology.
• Sounds: The poem uses a mix of soft and harsh consonant sounds to create a rhythm that mirrors the contrast in themes.

Theme

The primary theme is the critique of Trump’s calls for retribution and the danger they pose to democracy and political discourse.

Tone

The tone is critical and urgent, with a sense of warning and irony.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “Trump promised to get revenge. Here are his targets.”
  • 11 syllables, 8 words
• “Trump ran a campaign”
  • 5 syllables, 4 words
• “based on retribution.”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “Now he is perfectly”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “positioned to carry it out.”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “From Liz Cheney to Jack Smith”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “to Mark Mille, to Biden”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “To Harris, To Nancy Pelosi”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “To Hilary Clinton”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “And so many others”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “He has promised revenge”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “And retribution.”
  • 5 syllables, 2 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “President Joe Biden”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “Trump has frequently called Biden corrupt”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “and, in June, reposted a Truth Social message”
  • 11 syllables, 8 words
• “that said he should be “arrested for treason.””
  • 10 syllables, 8 words
• “Trump vowed: “I will appoint”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “a real special prosecutor”
  • 8 syllables, 4 words
• “to go after the most corrupt”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “president”
  • 3 syllables, 1 word
• “in the history”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “of the United States of America,”
  • 10 syllables, 7 words
• “Joe Biden,”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “and the entire Biden crime family.”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “Comment: projection I think?”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “The kettle calling the pot black?”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “Pretty rich to come from a man”
  • 8 syllables, 7 words
• “Whose son-in-law received”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “A two billion dollar pay off”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “From the Saudis at the tail end”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “Of Trump’s term”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “But the Republicans never talk about that”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “It was all about Hunter Biden’s 1 million dollars”
  • 11 syllables, 9 words
• “In Burisma pay offs in Ukraine”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “The two things are not the same thing”
  • 9 syllables
• “At all. End Comment”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “Vice President Kamala Harris”
  • 8 syllables, 4 words
• “Trump has described Harris’ failure to control migration”
  • 13 syllables, 9 words
• “as so severe that people have been”
  • 8 syllables, 7 words
• ““murdered because of her action at the border.””
  • 11 syllables, 8 words
• “Harris “should be impeached and prosecuted” for her role”
  • 12 syllables, 9 words
• “in permitting what he termed an “invasion” of the U.S.”
  • 12 syllables, 10 words
• “by undocumented immigrants.”
  • 8 syllables, 3 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “Former Secretary of State Hillary Clinton”
  • 10 syllables, 6 words
• ““Lock her up!” was a memorable refrain of Trump’s”
  • 11 syllables, 9 words
• “2016 campaign rallies, alluding vaguely”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “to Clinton’s use of a private email account”
  • 10 syllables, 8 words
• “while secretary of state and the ensuing FBI investigation,”
  • 13 syllables, 10 words
• “which did not lead to any charges.”
  • 8 syllables, 7 words
• “Former Secretary of State Hillary Rodham Clinton speaks”
  • 12 syllables, 8 words
• “during the Democratic National Convention Monday, Aug. 19, 2024, in Chicago.”
  • 15 syllables, 13 words
• “Wouldn’t it be terrible to throw the president’s wife”
  • 12 syllables, 10 words
• “and the former secretary of state … into jail?””
  • 10 syllables, 9 words
• “It’s a terrible, terrible, path that they’re leading us to”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “and it’s very possible that it’s going to have to happen to them.””
  • 14 syllables, 14 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “Former Speaker Nancy Pelosi”
  • 8 syllables, 4 words
• “In September, Trump said Pelosi should face criminal charges”
  • 13 syllables, 10 words
• “in connection with her husband’s sale of Visa stock”
  • 11 syllables, 9 words
• “a few months before the Justice Department sued the company”
  • 13 syllables, 11 words
• “for alleged antitrust violations.”
  • 9 syllables, 4 words
• “In a speech Monday, Trump said Pelosi “could’ve gone to jail”
  • 13 syllables, 11 words
• “for” theatrically ripping up a copy of Trump’s State of the Union address”
  • 15 syllables, 13 words
• “while sitting behind him on the House rostrum in 2020.”
  • 12 syllables, 11 words
• “Comment:”
  • 2 syllables, 1 word
• “While Pelosi dissed the President”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “What she did was perfectly legal and not a crime.”
  • 12 syllables, 10 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “Liz Cheney”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “In March, Trump declared on Truth Social that Cheney “should go to jail.””
  • 14 syllables, 12 words
• “calling Cheney “guilty of treason.””
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “Trump mused: “Let’s put her with a rifle standing there with nine barrels”
  • 15 syllables, 13 words
• “shooting at her.” He said he was accusing her of hypocrisy”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “for supporting the war in Iraq.”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “Comment:”
  • 2 syllables, 1 word
• “Again none of her actions are crimes”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “And do not rise to the level of treason.”
  • 10 syllables, 8 words
• “End comment”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “Special counsel Jack Smith”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Smith “must go to prison.” In August, Trump reposted a message”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “calling “Jackal Smith … a career criminal” and saying he “should be prosecuted”
  • 15 syllables, 13 words
• “for election interference and prosecutorial misconduct.””
  • 11 syllables, 8 words
• “Last month, appearing on a radio show, Trump called Smith “mentally deranged””
  • 15 syllables, 13 words
• “and said he “should be thrown out of the country.””
  • 10 syllables, 9 words
• “Comment:”
  • 2 syllables, 1 word
• “none of Smith’s actions are criminal”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “His own crime was to attempt to hold the real criminal Trump to account.”
  • 15 syllables, 14 words
• “And more projection”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “a deranged man showing signs of Alzheimer’s”
  • 10 syllables, 7 words
• “Calling his opponents deranged”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Classic Trump!!”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “End Comment”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “Former Chair of the Joint Chiefs of Staff Mark Milley”
  • 13 syllables, 10 words
• “For more than three years, Trump has railed against Milley,”
  • 13 syllables, 11 words
• “claiming that the general’s contact with a Chinese official”
  • 13 syllables, 10 words
• “during the tense transition period four years ago amounted to treason.”
  • 15 syllables, 13 words
• ““This is an act so egregious that, in times gone by,”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “the punishment would have been DEATH!” Trump declared in a social media post last year.”
  • 17 syllables, 16 words
• “The feud was reignited in recent days after Milley called Trump “fascist to his core.””
  • 17 syllables, 16 words
• “Comment:”
  • 2 syllables, 1 word
• “Milley’s actions were legal and in accordance with standard operating procedures”
  • 15 syllables, 13 words
• “Not treasonous conduct”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “And Milley is right”
  • 5 syllables, 4 words
• “Trump is a fascist to his core.”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• ““People on Trump’s enemy list should be concerned”
  • 11 syllables, 9 words
• “that they could be audited by the IRS.”
  • 9 syllables, 8 words
• “They could be the subject of a bogus congressional investigation.”
  • 13 syllables, 11 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• There may be even a way to conduct, or at least initiate,”
  • “a bogus criminal investigation.” 8 syllables, 4 words

Robert Mc Kenna “the Naked and the Nude” paired with “One Night In Bangkok:

During summer

when it was too hot to wear clothes.

All her nudity was accidental nudity.

It seems she never slept.

 

Each morning in the hallway halfway to the classroom, boom, naked.

Doing laundry sitting in the dryer turned high, disrupted.

In a kitchen lit by open icebox door, sneaking a Red Bull and vodka bang nude. Running the can opener and bent over to feed the sleeping cat at 3:00 AM.

How does she do that? Wow, I’m not sure. Again, why only high heels and lipstick?

Each time looking quite fox stun shy like a deer turn profile.

Expecting main stage headlights to come on poised Against the Tree.

Why are there windows blinds always up and never ending small bills left in my wallet?

 

When did that floor to ceiling pole get installed?

Alexa, why are you playing “ Pour some sugar on me?”

Now I remember

we met on Ruth Stanley near Chez Paree. My bad.

Remember, never take the stripper home.

 

Bad Craziness Rising

Notes  Written in 1996 when I was stationed in Bangkok and hung out at places like the Cosmos Bar (a real bar but here made up bar based on the legendary Thermae bar which opened up in the mens room of a Thai resturant – speakeasy style, it was the only bar open 24/7 and was most active about 3 am when everything else closed.  Owned by the Police, everything was wired for secret recordings which the police and criminals used as leverage to get information.  It was a den of intrigue  criminals, tourists, backpackers, Thai hustlers, drug dealers and spies and counter spies who met there to exchange notes the Russia FSI and CIA would meet there for example.  A very strange place – had the ambience of the bar in Star Wars.

“bao bao ya yah Madi  means losely crazines craziness very very bad craziness

Bao bao ya ya is also the street name for meth

Drugs of all sorts were for sale very cheap  heroin was cheaper than beer in those days and maurijana was illegal then and cops were shaking down foreing tourists all the time.  they would call us up and tell us they were busted for drugs and the cops were demanding 5,000 dollars to make it go away. What should they do?

Our standard response was

“well we can not offer legal advice, can give you the address of a lawyer, and will visit you in jail if you end up there,  but think about it once they file the paperwork you are going to a Thai prison for 25 years so think about your options.  They always paid the bribe”.

The Orange man is probably a reference to Trump who even then was known for his orange glow and hair. The Image just popped in my head why not? Trump was known to be a night owl and he had been to Bangkok and probably hung out at the Thermae Bar.

• PoemHunter: Jake Cosmos Aller Poems
• AllPoetry: Jake Aller – poet at AllPoetry

https://allpoetry.com/Jake_Aller

• Synchronized Chaos: Poetry from Jake Cosmos Aller

https://synchchaos.com/poetry-from-jake-cosmos-aller-8/

Sure! Here’s an analysis of your poem, “My Father’s Hands”:

Meter

The poem does not follow a strict meter, but it has a free verse structure with varying syllable counts and line lengths.

Poetic Techniques

• Imagery: The poem uses vivid imagery to describe the father’s hands and their impact.
• Repetition: The phrases “Sturdy and strong,” “Long fingered,” and “Prominently veined” are repeated for emphasis.
• Alliteration: Phrases like “painted, wallpapered” and “keeping him company” employ alliteration.
• Symbolism: The father’s hands symbolize strength, craftsmanship, and artistry.
• Personification: The hands are given life and character through the descriptions.
• Enjambment: Many lines flow into the next without a pause, creating a sense of continuity.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: The diction is simple, direct, and evocative, creating a vivid picture of the father’s hands and their significance.
• Sounds: The poem uses soft, consonant sounds to evoke a sense of tenderness and admiration.

Theme

The primary theme is the enduring impact of a parent’s influence, symbolized by the father’s hands. It explores themes of legacy, admiration, and self-acceptance.

Tone

The tone is nostalgic, reverent, and introspective, reflecting on the father’s influence and the speaker’s journey to self-acceptance.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “When I close my eyes, I remember my father’s hands.”
  • 13 syllables, 11 words
• “Sturdy and strong.”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Long fingered.”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “Prominently veined.”
  • 5 syllables, 2 words
• “Leaving their impact in the various projects.”
  • 11 syllables, 8 words
• “Still visible throughout my childhood home.”
  • 10 syllables, 7 words
• “I love keeping him company”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “As he painted, wallpapered, hammered and solid.”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “We spent hours listening to recordings.”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “Of old radio broadcasts as he worked.”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “Here’s where the hands that taught me.”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “To light a match.”
  • 4 syllables, 4 words
• “Drive a nail.”
  • 3 syllables, 3 words
• “And eventually drive a car.”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “As a young lady I became self-conscious of my large thick veined hands.”
  • 18 syllables, 16 words
• “I tried to hide them until a stranger remarked in their beauty.”
  • 16 syllables, 13 words
• “Beauty! I spluttered.”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “Yes, Beauty.”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “Those hands have power in them.”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “Those hands are the hands of artists.”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “Today. I look down on my hands:”
  • 8 syllables, 7 words
• “Sturdy and strong,”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Long fingered.”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “Prominently veined.”
  • 5 syllables, 2 words
• “And with gratitude.”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “See my father.”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words

Poetic Schools and Influences

The poem can be categorized under contemporary free verse poetry, influenced by confessional poetry for its personal and introspective nature. The detailed imagery and focus on personal experience are reminiscent of poets like Sylvia Plath and Anne Sexton.

I hope this analysis helps! If you need more details or have other questions, feel free to ask.

I found the poem “Old Man in the Mirror Must Die” by Jake Cosmos Aller on All Poetry1. Here’s the link to the poem: [Old Man in the Mirror Must Die](http1s://allpoetry.com/poem/12567819-Old-Man-in-the-Mirror-Must-Die–by-Jake-Aller).

Analysis of “Old Man in the Mirror Must Die”

Meter

The poem does not follow a strict meter and is written in free verse, allowing for a natural flow of speech.

Poetic Techniques

• Repetition: The phrase “Old man, mocking fiend from hell” is repeated, emphasizing the disdain the speaker feels towards the old man.
• Direct Address: The speaker directly addresses the old man in the mirror, creating a confrontational tone.
• Imagery: The poem uses vivid imagery to depict the old man and the speaker’s reaction to him.
• Personification: The old man in the mirror is personified as a separate entity that the speaker can interact with.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: The language is straightforward and colloquial, reflecting the speaker’s frustration and anger.
• Sounds: The poem uses harsh consonant sounds (e.g., “mocking fiend from hell”) to convey the speaker’s animosity.

Theme

The primary theme is the internal struggle with aging and self-acceptance. The speaker confronts the old man in the mirror, symbolizing his fear and denial of aging.

Tone

The tone is aggressive and confrontational, reflecting the speaker’s anger and refusal to accept the reality of aging.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “The man yelled at the old man”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “Old man, mocking fiend from hell”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “Go to hell old man”
  • 5 syllables, 4 words
• “And never darken my mirror again”
  • 10 syllables, 6 words
• “And the man stormed out of the house”
  • 11 syllables, 7 words
• “And wandered about here and there”
  • 10 syllables, 6 words
• “Finally late at night”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “He wandered into a bar”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “And began drinking the night away”
  • 11 syllables, 7 words
• “The man went up to some pretty young things” -114 syllables, 8 words
• “And tried to pick them up”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words

Poetic Schools and Influences

The poem can be categorized under contemporary free verse poetry, influenced by confessional poetry for its personal and introspective nature. The detailed imagery and focus on personal experience are reminiscent of poets like Sylvia Plath and Anne Sexton.

I hope this analysis helps! If you need more details or have other questions, feel free to ask.

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Let’s analyze each poem separately, noting where they share similar poetic techniques.

“The Modern Cinderella” by Peter V. Dugan

Meter

The poem is written in free verse, without a strict meter.

Poetic Techniques

• Imagery: Vivid descriptions of household chores and memories of city life.
• Contrast: The mundane tasks of laundry and dishwashing are contrasted with the glamorous memories of dining and attending plays.
• Allusion: Reference to Bette Davis, adding a touch of drama and nostalgia.
• Irony: The title “Modern Cinderella” contrasts with the reality of the woman’s life.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: Simple and direct, reflecting the everyday nature of the tasks.
• Sounds: The poem uses soft consonant sounds to create a sense of routine and monotony.

Theme

The theme revolves around the contrast between mundane domestic life and the longing for past glamour and excitement.

Tone

The tone is reflective and slightly melancholic, with a touch of irony.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “She put up the third load.”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “Of laundry into the washer.”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “Begin to fold the clothes.”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “Taken from the dryer.”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “Later, she empties the dishwasher.”
  • 9 syllables, 5 words
• “She remembers the night in the city.”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “Dining on French cuisine”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “And attending one of the most”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• ““must see plays” on Broadway.”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “She knows she could be spoiled”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “Being one of the “beautiful people”.”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “So she sashays around the house”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “In her dressing robe doing her best”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “Bette Davis “I’m so bored, darling.””
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “Her husband sits quietly,”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Reading the paper, sipping coffee”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “Ignoring her.”
  • 4 syllables, 2 words

“The Rest of the Story” by Maria Lee

Meter

The poem is written in free verse, without a strict meter.

Poetic Techniques

• Imagery: Descriptions of the husband’s indifference and the wife’s frustration.
• Direct Address: The wife directly addresses her husband and later the police.
• Irony: The wife’s drastic actions contrast with the mundane nature of her complaints.
• Allusion: Reference to their past as a “power couple.”

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: Direct and colloquial, reflecting the wife’s frustration and anger.
• Sounds: The poem uses harsh consonant sounds to convey the wife’s anger.

Theme

The theme revolves around the frustration and disillusionment of a long-term marriage, leading to a dramatic and violent resolution.

Tone

The tone is angry and confrontational, with a sense of desperation.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “Maria Lee”
  • 4 syllables, 2 words
• “Had had enough”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Of the indifference”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “Of her husband”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Of 40 years”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Even since he retired”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “He has been so boring”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “And she could not recall”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “The last time”
  • 3 syllables, 3 words
• “She made her cum”
  • 4 syllables, 4 words
• “It had been so long.”
  • 5 syllables, 5 words
• “She recalled when they were”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “A power couple”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “Twenty years ago,”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “Now they are just an old”
  • 6 syllables, 6 words
• “Boring retired couple.”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “She was furious”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Pulled out her gun”
  • 4 syllables, 4 words
• “And shot her husband dead.”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “Screaming”
  • 2 syllables, 1 word
• ““Pay attention to me!”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “I am not your slave”
  • 5 syllables, 5 words
• “I am not one of your toys.”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “I am your wife”
  • 4 syllables, 4 words
• “And we used to be lovers.’”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “When the police came”
  • 5 syllables, 4 words
• “She told them”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• ““I shot him”
  • 3 syllables, 3 words
• “Because he is so boring”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “And I could not stand”
  • 5 syllables, 5 words
• “The sight of him”
  • 4 syllables, 4 words
• “Ignoring me”
  • 4 syllables, 2 words
• “As a I danced”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Half naked across the room.”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “Waiting for him to wake up”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “And notice me”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Notice that I am still”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “A beautiful sexy woman”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “And still need to be satisfied”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “As only a man can satisfy”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “His woman.””
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “She became a cause celebre”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “So many old couples could relate”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “Did the celebrity TV circuit”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “Against her lawyer’s advice.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “But she ended up”
  • 5 syllables, 4 words
• “Getting 25 years”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “In prison.”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words

Shared Poetic Techniques

• Imagery: Both poems use vivid imagery to depict the characters’ lives and emotions.
• Irony: Both poems employ irony to highlight the contrast between appearance and reality.
• Direct Address: Both poems feature direct address, with characters speaking to others or themselves.
• Tone: Both poems have a reflective tone, though “The Rest of the Story” shifts to a more confrontational tone.

 

Andrea Sinnott “And Then Came COVID-19” paired with  General Corona Poem

 

One day, the world felt pretty safe.

And I was happy in my life.

When suddenly a virus appeared.

Because the whole world much strife.

I caught that virus early on.

I lost my sense of smell.

And a fever struck went off one night.

I knew I was not well.

I thought that my family and how I didn’t want to leave.

I thought it was all the memories I still wanted to weave.

Well, well, someone was watching over me.

The virus went away

I went out for my walks again.

The world was no longer so Gray.

That virus taught me a lesson not to waste time and petty things.

But you take each day as precious and appreciate what life can bring..

 

• Romanized: bao bao ya ya ma di

I hope this helps! Let me know if you need any further assistance.

You said

can you find my poem by Jake Cosmos Aller titled general Corona

Copilot said

I found your poem “General Corona” on AllPoetry1. Here is the link to it: General Corona is coming for us all1.

Would you like me to analyze this poem as well, or is there something specific you’re looking for?

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General Corona Is Coming to For Us All

 

General Corona is coming for us all

I saw the best minds of my generation
destroyed by madness
consumed by the greed
all around us
the dreaded corona virus spreads
its death and destruction
all over the world
no one can escape
THE FATE OF THE WORLD
IS INDEED AT STAKE
NONE OF US CAN
ESCAPE

OUR
FATE
content tracing “Howl” by Allen Ginsberg

 

General Corona is Coming for Us all is a Haiku poem invented during the pandemic.  It is a 14 line sonnet free verse form where you inject trace elements from another poem in the middle of the poem and attribute where it came from. In my case, I injected lines from Howl by Allen Ginzberg.

 

The character General Corona appeared in many of my poems from this period.  I fell asleep watching one of Trump’s early COVID task force realty TV farce press conference before he walked away after he was mocked for his bleach comments. The show continued for a while hosted by Pence and Fuaci but Trump never showed up again which was a good thing as the press conferences started actually offering good solid information and helped calm things down.

 

Trump had just finished comparing COVID to an an invisible army and said he was a war time president.  I said as I fell asleep well an army has to have a General.  I saw a tall black man dressed in a dark suite looking like Samuel L Jackson riding the black horse of death from the four horsemen of the apocalypse leading an army of imperial storm troopers who were slashing at people or shooting ray guns and infecting people with COVID,

 

 

https://allpoetry.com/poem/15128119—General-Corona-is-coming-for-us-all—-by-Jake-Aller

 

Analysis of “General Corona” by Jake Cosmos Aller

Meter

The poem is written in free verse, without a strict meter.

Poetic Techniques

• Personification: The virus is personified as “General Corona,” a formidable enemy.
• Imagery: Vivid imagery describes the impact of the virus on the world and the speaker’s life.
• Alliteration: Phrases like “Cosmos Bar” and “City of Lost Angels” employ alliteration.
• Symbolism: The virus symbolizes a global threat, affecting everyone indiscriminately.
• Juxtaposition: Contrasting scenes of normal life and the chaos brought by the virus.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: The language is straightforward and colloquial, reflecting the conversational tone of the poem.
• Sounds: The poem uses a mix of harsh and soft consonant sounds to create a rhythm that mirrors the contrast between normalcy and chaos.

Theme

The primary theme is the global impact of the COVID-19 pandemic, the struggle for survival, and the eventual hope for recovery.

Tone

The tone is somber and reflective, with a sense of urgency and warning.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “General Corona is coming for us all”
  • 12 syllables, 7 words
• “He will not stop until we fall”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “Invisible enemy, a relentless foe”
  • 11 syllables, 7 words
• “Spreading fear and sorrow wherever we go”
  • 12 syllables, 8 words
• “Lockdown our cities, close all the doors”
  • 10 syllables, 7 words
• “Empty the streets, shut down the stores”
  • 10 syllables, 7 words
• “Wear a mask, keep your distance”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “Follow the rules, for our own existence”
  • 10 syllables, 7 words
• “General Corona, the silent killer”
  • 10 syllables, 6 words
• “We fight with science, hope, and willpower”
  • 10 syllables, 7 words
• “The battle is long, the journey is tough”
  • 10 syllables, 8 words
• “But we will survive, we are strong enough”
  • 10 syllables, 8 words

“One Day, the World Felt Pretty Safe”

Meter

The poem is written in free verse, without a strict meter.

Poetic Techniques

• Narrative: The poem follows a narrative structure, recounting the speaker’s experience with the virus.
• Imagery: Vivid imagery describes the impact of the virus on the speaker’s life.
• Alliteration: Phrases like “sense of smell” and “someone was watching” employ alliteration.
• Symbolism: The virus symbolizes an unexpected threat, disrupting normal life.
• Juxtaposition: Contrasting scenes of normal life and the chaos brought by the virus.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: The language is straightforward and colloquial, reflecting the conversational tone of the poem.
• Sounds: The poem uses a mix of harsh and soft consonant sounds to create a rhythm that mirrors the contrast between normalcy and chaos.

Theme

The primary theme is the personal impact of the COVID-19 pandemic, the struggle for survival, and the eventual hope for recovery.

Tone

The tone is reflective and hopeful, with a sense of resilience and gratitude.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “One day, the world felt pretty safe.”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “And I was happy in my life.”
  • 8 syllables, 7 words
• “When suddenly a virus appeared.”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “Because the whole world much strife.”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “I caught that virus early on.”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “I lost my sense of smell.”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “And a fever struck went off one night.”
  • 10 syllables, 8 words
• “I knew I was not well.”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “I thought that my family and how I didn’t want to leave.”
  • 14 syllables, 11 words
• “I thought it was all the memories I still wanted to weave.”
  • 14 syllables, 12 words
• “Well, well, someone was watching over me.”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “The virus went away”
  • 5 syllables, 4 words
• “I went out for my walks again.”
  • 8 syllables, 7 words
• “The world was no longer so Gray.”
  • 8 syllables, 7 words
• “That virus taught me a lesson not to waste time and petty things.”
  • 15 syllables, 13 words
• “But you take each day as precious and appreciate what life can bring.”
  • 14 syllables, 13 words

Commentary

• Both poems deal with the impact of the COVID-19 pandemic, but from different perspectives.
• “General Corona” personifies the virus as a military enemy, emphasizing the global struggle and the collective effort to combat it.
• “One Day, the World Felt Pretty Safe” recounts a personal experience, highlighting the emotional and psychological impact of the virus on an individual level.
• Both poems use vivid imagery and a mix of harsh and soft consonant sounds to convey the contrast between normalcy and chaos.
• The themes of resilience, survival, and hope are present in both poems, reflecting the universal struggle and the eventual recovery from the pandemic.

 

Barbera Southhard “conversation with the cat paired with “Cosmic Cat from Berkeley”.

 

Conversations with the cat.

 

You showed up in the basement 1 cold winter morning.

Pathetically yawning. I could hear you, but not find you.

In the dark recesses of the crawl space.

Days went by, went by and everything morning you let me know.

I am here at a safe distance. I am here.         

 

Then I found you crouched in the far dark corner.

And when I saw the two sunken eyes and bedded in a furless

skull.

I was certain you would soon die

 

Each morning I’d bring you food and water and each morning.

You wait until I left to eat from the bowl.

Three weeks passed before you crept closer and when you.

Finally,when you  let me sit next to you. I could see multitudes.

Of mites feeding on your ears

 

The first time you turned you back to me while you ate.

I knew we’d become friends and the first time I touch you.

You rubbed your swollen eyes against my hand.

 

In time. Patches of fur grew back around your face. New Years. Now for your minds, you’re somewhat awkward for a cat.

Your gait a bit unsure but you survived.

 

You I could save.

 

..

cosmic cat from Berkeley

I next encountered the divine
Many years later in Berkeley, California
I had gone home to be with my Mother
While taking leave from my job
in the Foreign Service

I had two weeks there by myself
My wife came later
near the end of the trip

Every morning I woke up
Had my coffee, and breakfast
Did yoga while listening to music

And looking out at the garden
Then spoke to my mother
Who was sliding into dementia
Day by day losing her reason
Then I would go out

And explore the city
Go to a museum

Go to one neighborhood
And just be there

Rediscovering the Bay area
After years of being away

Having dinner with old friends
Seeing movies etc

Every morning a black cat came to visit
The cat was friendly and waited for me

And then would join me in my morning rambles
Following me to the bus stop

I stated talking to the black cat
He looked at me with the spark of divinity
In his dark eyes

I called him the cosmic cat
He seemed to like that

He would look at me
And I opened up to me
Told the cat all my dark secrets
As I walked the streets
Of the old neighborhood

Every morning and every evening the cat
Would be there to greet me

And to carry out our endless conversation
Then I had to leave

And in our final conversation
I asked the cosmic cat

Say, Cat are you just a cat
Or are you a demonic cat
Are you possessed by God
Or by Satan

The cat looked at me
And I realized that God
Was indeed residing in the cat

But that god was residing everywhere
All I had to do was open my mind
And the rest would follow

So I said Good bye to the cosmic cat
And he purred and came up to me

And I felt the comforting presence
Of the divine spirit of God

As I said goodbye to the cosmic cat
And said goodbye to my mother
As this was the last time
That we would be able to really talk

I told my mother about the cosmic cat
She smiled and said that the cat
was there for me and her
to comfort us both in our hour of need

and that the cat was indeed
a cosmic cat

 

You said

What is the hours of the apo at yongsan south korea

Copilot said

I couldn’t find the specific hours for the APO at Yongsan, South Korea. It’s best to contact the US Army Garrison Yongsan directly for the most accurate information. You can reach them at Tel: 011-822-7918-7186 or visit their official website for more details.

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You said

I need to buy a MDI cable to connect my go Rolland 88 piano to my lap top computer what is the best MIDI cable to buy and how do I install it please include how to videos and links

Copilot said

To connect your Roland 88 piano to your laptop, you’ll need a reliable MIDI cable. Here are some top recommendations:

1. Roland UM-ONE-MK2 MIDI Cable: This is a popular choice due to its compatibility and ease of use1. It’s a USB MIDI interface that works well with both Windows and Mac systems1.
2. Fore F-M002 MIDI to USB Adapter: Another great option, this adapter is plug-and-play and works with a variety of music software2.
3. Monoprice 108532 MIDI Cable: A more budget-friendly option that still offers good performance2.

Installation Steps:

1. Gather Necessary Equipment: Ensure you have the MIDI cable, your Roland piano, and your laptop3.
2. Connect the MIDI Cable: Plug one end of the MIDI cable into the MIDI OUT port on your Roland piano and the other end into the MIDI IN port on your laptop or MIDI interface3.
3. Install MIDI Drivers: If your laptop doesn’t recognize the MIDI device automatically, you may need to install MIDI drivers4. Check the manufacturer’s website for the latest drivers4.
4. Configure MIDI Settings: Open your music software and configure the MIDI settings to recognize your Roland piano as the input device3.
5. Test the Connection: Play a few notes on your piano to ensure the connection is working properly3.

Helpful Videos:

• How To Setup MIDI Cable with MIDI Piano & MIDI Interface: This video provides a step5-by-step guide on connecting MIDI cables.
• [Connecting USB MIDI Cable to PC using with Virtual Piano, VST’s, etc](https://www.youtube.com/wat6ch?v=zbYKKpN4_Wo): This video shows how to connect a USB MIDI cable to your PC.

Would you like more detailed instructions on any of these steps?

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You said

what are the best music writing software to buy that is compatable with a rollan piano

Copilot said

Here are some of the best music writing software options that are compatible with Roland pianos:

1. MuseScore 4: A free, open-source music notation software available for Windows, Mac, and Linux1. It supports MIDI input and allows you to import and export MIDI files1.
2. Sibelius: Known for its comprehensive features and user-friendly interface, Sibelius is available for Windows, Mac, and iOS1. It offers various versions, including a free version and a full unlimited version1.
3. Noteflight: An online music notation program that works on Windows, Mac, iPhones, and Android devices1. It allows for easy sharing and collaboration1.
4. Notion 6: A professional-grade music notation software by PreSonus, compatible with Windows and Mac1. It offers a mobile app with handwriting recognition1.
5. Dorico Pro: Developed by Steinberg, Dorico Pro is designed for complex compositions and supports multiple instruments12.
6. Hookpad: An intuitive music sketchpad software that simplifies songwriting with chord progression suggestions2. It’s available for Windows and Mac2.
7. Forte Notation: Ideal for live recording, Forte Notation offers unique audio and MIDI editing features2.

Would you like more information on any of these options?

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You said

I am writing a review of the Book, the 6:20 man, Please provide a synopsis, a list of characters and a discusison of themes and literary reputation of the novel. Also please provide a list of his books including any movie or TV versions.

You said

could you provide a list of movies and TV adaptions of Badduci’s novels

Copilot said

David Baldacci’s novels have been adapted into several movies and TV shows1. Here are some notable ones:

Movies

1. “Wish You Well”(2013) – Based on the novel of the same name, this film stars Ellen Burstyn and Josh Lucas1.
2. “The Christmas Train”(2017) – A TV movie adaptation of his novel, featuring Dermot Mulroney and Kimberly Williams-Paisley1.

TV Shows

1. “King & Maxwell”(2013) – A TV series based on the characters from Baldacci’s novels, starring Jon Tenney and Rebecca Romijn1.
2. “Absolute Power”– A TV movie adaptation of his novel, starring Clint Eastwood and Gene Hackman.

Would you like more details on any of these adaptations?

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You said

I am writing a review of the book, Flashman on the March by George McDonald Frazer I am writing a review of the Book, the 6:20 man, Please provide a synopsis, a list of characters and a discusison of themes and literary reputation of the novel. Also please provide a list of his books including any movie or TV versions. and please provide a summary of the historical events depicted in the novel and how accurate is the novel compared to the historical record

Copilot said

It seems like there might be a mix-up with the titles. Did you mean “Flashman on the March” by George MacDonald Fraser or “The 6:20 Man” by another author? Could you clarify which one you’re referring to so I can provide the correct information?

You said

Oh I met Flashman on the March

Copilot said

Got it! Let’s dive into “Flashman on the March” by George MacDonald Fraser.

Synopsis

“Flashman on the March” is the twelfth book in the Flashman series, which follows the adventures of the notorious, cowardly, and roguish anti-hero, Sir Harry Flashman. This installment is set during the British Expedition to Abyssinia (modern-day Ethiopia) in 1868. Flashman, against his better judgment, finds himself embroiled in the campaign to rescue British hostages from Emperor Tewodros II.

List of Characters

1. Sir Harry Flashman: The protagonist, known for his cowardice and cunning.
2. Emperor Tewodros II: The ruler of Abyssinia, who has taken British hostages.
3. Sir Robert Napier: The British commander leading the expedition.
4. Queen Masteeat: The strong and influential queen consort of Tewodros.
5. Samuel H.S. Barnes: Flashman’s friend and fellow officer.
6. Alice Mandeville: One of the British hostages, who becomes entangled with Flashman.

Themes

1. Colonialism and Imperialism: The novel explores the complexities of British imperialism in Africa, highlighting both the arrogance and the occasional benevolence of the empire.
2. Courage and Cowardice: Flashman’s character embodies the contradictions of bravery and cowardice, often finding himself heroic by accident.
3. Survival and Deception: Flashman’s survival instincts lead him to use deception and manipulation to navigate dangerous situations.
4. Cultural Clashes: The novel vividly portrays the cultural differences and misunderstandings between the British and the Abyssinians.

Literary Reputation

“Flashman on the March” is acclaimed for its historical accuracy, rich detail, and Fraser’s ability to blend fiction with real historical events. The series is praised for its satirical and irreverent take on Victorian imperialism, with Flashman being a character readers love to hate. Fraser’s meticulous research and engaging storytelling have earned the Flashman series a devoted following.

Historical Events Depicted

The novel is set against the backdrop of the British Expedition to Abyssinia in 1868, led by Sir Robert Napier. The mission aimed to rescue British hostages held by Emperor Tewodros II. The historical accuracy of the military campaign, the terrain, and the characters’ interactions with historical figures is notable. Fraser weaves real events seamlessly into Flashman’s fictional adventures, making the novel both educational and entertaining.

List of George MacDonald Fraser’s Books

1. “Flashman” (1969)
2. “Royal Flash” (1970)
3. “Flash for Freedom!” (1971)
4. “Flashman at the Charge” (1973)
5. “Flashman in the Great Game” (1975)
6. “Flashman’s Lady” (1977)
7. “Flashman and the Redskins” (1982)
8. “Flashman and the Dragon” (1985)
9. “Flashman and the Mountain of Light” (1990)
10. “Flashman and the Angel of the Lord” (1994)
11. “Flashman and the Tiger” (1999)
12. “Flashman on the March” (2005)

Movie and TV Adaptations

1. “Royal Flash” (1975): A film adaptation starring Malcolm McDowell as Harry Flashman.

The Flashman series has a dedicated fan base, but adaptations have been limited. “Royal Flash” remains the only film adaptation to date.

I hope this helps with your review! If you need more details or have any other requests, feel free to ask.

You said

oh discuss the character Harry Flashman in the novel Tom Brown’s school days and the character of Flashman in the Flashman novels

Copilot said

Certainly! Let’s take a look at the character of Harry Flashman in both “Tom Brown’s School Days” and the Flashman novels by George MacDonald Fraser.

Harry Flashman in “Tom Brown’s School Days” by Thomas Hughes

In “Tom Brown’s School Days”, Harry Flashman is introduced as the quintessential bully. He is a senior at Rugby School, where he terrorizes younger students, particularly Tom Brown, the protagonist. Flashman is depicted as cowardly, vindictive, and morally corrupt, using physical intimidation and cruelty to assert his dominance. His character serves as a contrast to the more honorable and virtuous Tom Brown, highlighting the moral lessons about courage and integrity that Hughes aims to impart.

Harry Flashman in the Flashman Novels by George MacDonald Fraser

In the Flashman novels, George MacDonald Fraser takes the character of Harry Flashman from “Tom Brown’s School Days” and turns him into the anti-hero of his own series. The Flashman novels are a series of historical fiction books that follow Flashman’s adventures and misadventures across various historical events of the 19th century.

Key Characteristics:

• Cowardice: Flashman remains a coward at heart. He often finds himself in dangerous situations not by choice but by circumstance, and his primary instinct is self-preservation.
• Charm and Wit: Despite his moral shortcomings, Flashman is charming and witty, which helps him navigate social and political circles.
• Opportunism: Flashman is a master of opportunism, taking advantage of situations to advance his own interests, often at the expense of others.
• Survivor: Despite his cowardice and lack of morals, Flashman has an uncanny ability to survive and even thrive in the most perilous situations.

Themes in the Flashman Novels:

1. Satire and Parody: Fraser uses Flashman to satirize Victorian society and its values. Flashman’s exploits highlight the absurdities and hypocrisies of the British Empire.
2. Historical Accuracy: The novels are well-researched and provide a vivid portrayal of historical events. Flashman often crosses paths with real historical figures, adding authenticity to the narrative.
3. Moral Ambiguity: Flashman’s character challenges traditional notions of heroism and morality, presenting a more cynical view of history and human nature.

Comparison and Conclusion

The character of Harry Flashman in “Tom Brown’s School Days” is a one-dimensional villain, serving as a foil to the virtuous Tom Brown. In contrast, Fraser’s Flashman is a multi-dimensional anti-hero whose flaws and failings are explored in depth. While he remains a scoundrel, Fraser’s depiction of Flashman is more nuanced, making him a fascinating and complex character.

The Flashman novels have been praised for their blend of humor, historical accuracy, and engaging storytelling, making Harry Flashman a memorable and enduring character in historical fiction.

I hope this comparison helps! Let me know if you need further details or analysis.

You said

I am writing a review of the Book, the 26th Annual Literary Review by the Perfomance Poets Association Can you provide me the table of contents ?

Copilot said

I’m sorry, but I couldn’t find the table of contents for the 26th Annual Literary Review by the Performance Poets Association. It might not be readily available online.

You might want to check the Performance Poets Association’s official website or contact them directly for more information. If you have any other questions or need further assistance, feel free to ask!

You said

oh can you provide me a link to the site

Copilot said

I couldn’t find a direct link to the Performance Poets Association’s official website. However, you can check their Facebook page for more information and updates: [Performance Poets Association on Facebook](http1s://www.facebook.com/Performance-Poets-Association-100958886610788/).

If you need more specific details or have any other questions, feel free to ask!

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You said

Please analyze the following poems indicating meter, if any, poetic techniques used, diction, sounds, theme, tone, word count, syllable count by line, (spell out each line indicating syllable, word count per line, poetic schools, and influences. Oh and provide the text if possible and links to the poems 26th Annual Literary Review Performance Poet’s Association Winners 1. Anne Coen My Father’s Hands 2. GeorgenNorthrup Your 98th Birthday 3. Elaine Preston Downtown 4. Peter A Dugan The Modern Cinderella 5. Daniel Keer A Jackass Riding a Donkey 6. Robert Mc Kenna the Naked and the Nude 7. Juan Amato Pale in the Midst of Chaos 8. Sasha Ettinger. The distance between forgetting and remembering 9. Robert Savino? Fog. 10. Andrea Sinnott And then came COVID-19.

Copilot said

You said

Please analyze the following poems indicating meter, if any, poetic techniques used, diction, sounds, theme, tone, word count, syllable count by line, (spell out each line indicating syllable, word count per line, poetic schools, and influences. When I close my eyes, I remember my father’s hands. Sturdy and strong. Long fingered. Prominently veined. Leaving their impact in the various projects. Still visible throughout my childhood home. ,, I love keeping him company As he painted,. Wallpapered, hammered and solid.. We spend hours listening to recordings. Of old radio broadcasts as he worked. Here’s where the hands that taught me. To light a match. Drive a nail. And eventually drive a car. As a young lady I became self-conscious of my large thick veined hands. I tried to hide them until a stranger remarked in their beauty. Beuuty! I spluttered. Yes, Beauty. Those hands have power in them. Those hands are the hands of artists. Today. I looked down on my hands: Sturdy and strong, Long fingered. Prominently vain. And with gratitude. See my father.

Copilot said

Sure! Here’s an analysis of your poem, “My Father’s Hands”:

Meter

The poem does not follow a strict meter, but it has a free verse structure with varying syllable counts and line lengths.

Poetic Techniques

• Imagery: The poem uses vivid imagery to describe the father’s hands and their impact.
• Repetition: The phrases “Sturdy and strong,” “Long fingered,” and “Prominently veined” are repeated for emphasis.
• Alliteration: Phrases like “painted, wallpapered” and “keeping him company” employ alliteration.
• Symbolism: The father’s hands symbolize strength, craftsmanship, and artistry.
• Personification: The hands are given life and character through the descriptions.
• Enjambment: Many lines flow into the next without a pause, creating a sense of continuity.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: The diction is simple, direct, and evocative, creating a vivid picture of the father’s hands and their significance.
• Sounds: The poem uses soft, consonant sounds to evoke a sense of tenderness and admiration.

Theme

The primary theme is the enduring impact of a parent’s influence, symbolized by the father’s hands. It explores themes of legacy, admiration, and self-acceptance.

Tone

The tone is nostalgic, reverent, and introspective, reflecting on the father’s influence and the speaker’s journey to self-acceptance.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “When I close my eyes, I remember my father’s hands.”
  • 13 syllables, 11 words
• “Sturdy and strong.”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Long fingered.”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “Prominently veined.”
  • 5 syllables, 2 words
• “Leaving their impact in the various projects.”
  • 11 syllables, 8 words
• “Still visible throughout my childhood home.”
  • 10 syllables, 7 words
• “I love keeping him company”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “As he painted, wallpapered, hammered and solid.”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “We spent hours listening to recordings.”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “Of old radio broadcasts as he worked.”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “Here’s where the hands that taught me.”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “To light a match.”
  • 4 syllables, 4 words
• “Drive a nail.”
  • 3 syllables, 3 words
• “And eventually drive a car.”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “As a young lady I became self-conscious of my large thick veined hands.”
  • 18 syllables, 16 words
• “I tried to hide them until a stranger remarked in their beauty.”
  • 16 syllables, 13 words
• “Beauty! I spluttered.”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “Yes, Beauty.”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “Those hands have power in them.”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “Those hands are the hands of artists.”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “Today. I look down on my hands:”
  • 8 syllables, 7 words
• “Sturdy and strong,”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Long fingered.”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “Prominently veined.”
  • 5 syllables, 2 words
• “And with gratitude.”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “See my father.”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words

Poetic Schools and Influences

The poem can be categorized under contemporary free verse poetry, influenced by confessional poetry for its personal and introspective nature. The detailed imagery and focus on personal experience are reminiscent of poets like Sylvia Plath and Anne Sexton.

I hope this analysis helps! If you need more details or have other questions, feel free to ask.

You said

can you find a poem by Jake Cosmos Aller called Old Man in the Mirror must die and provide a link and an analysis of the poem using the following criteria? Please analyze the following poems indicating meter, if any, poetic techniques used, diction, sounds, theme, tone, word count, syllable count by line, (spell out each line indicating syllable, word count per line, poetic schools, and influences.

Copilot said

I found the poem “Old Man in the Mirror Must Die” by Jake Cosmos Aller on All Poetry1. Here’s the link to the poem: [Old Man in the Mirror Must Die](http1s://allpoetry.com/poem/12567819-Old-Man-in-the-Mirror-Must-Die–by-Jake-Aller).

Analysis of “Old Man in the Mirror Must Die”

Meter

The poem does not follow a strict meter and is written in free verse, allowing for a natural flow of speech.

Poetic Techniques

• Repetition: The phrase “Old man, mocking fiend from hell” is repeated, emphasizing the disdain the speaker feels towards the old man.
• Direct Address: The speaker directly addresses the old man in the mirror, creating a confrontational tone.
• Imagery: The poem uses vivid imagery to depict the old man and the speaker’s reaction to him.
• Personification: The old man in the mirror is personified as a separate entity that the speaker can interact with.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: The language is straightforward and colloquial, reflecting the speaker’s frustration and anger.
• Sounds: The poem uses harsh consonant sounds (e.g., “mocking fiend from hell”) to convey the speaker’s animosity.

Theme

The primary theme is the internal struggle with aging and self-acceptance. The speaker confronts the old man in the mirror, symbolizing his fear and denial of aging.

Tone

The tone is aggressive and confrontational, reflecting the speaker’s anger and refusal to accept the reality of aging.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “The man yelled at the old man”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “Old man, mocking fiend from hell”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “Go to hell old man”
  • 5 syllables, 4 words
• “And never darken my mirror again”
  • 10 syllables, 6 words
• “And the man stormed out of the house”
  • 11 syllables, 7 words
• “And wandered about here and there”
  • 10 syllables, 6 words
• “Finally late at night”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “He wandered into a bar”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “And began drinking the night away”
  • 11 syllables, 7 words
• “The man went up to some pretty young things” -114 syllables, 8 words
• “And tried to pick them up”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words

Poetic Schools and Influences

The poem can be categorized under contemporary free verse poetry, influenced by confessional poetry for its personal and introspective nature. The detailed imagery and focus on personal experience are reminiscent of poets like Sylvia Plath and Anne Sexton.

I hope this analysis helps! If you need more details or have other questions, feel free to ask.

1allpoetry.com

You said

Please analyze the following poems indicating meter, if any, poetic techniques used, diction, sounds, theme, tone, word count, syllable count by line, (spell out each line indicating syllable, word count per line, poetic schools, and influences. note that there are two poems the original and my end of the story version please analyzie each poem seperately but note where they share similar poetic techniques etc Peter V Dugan, The Modern Cinderella She put up the third load. Of laundry into the washer. Begin to fold the clothes. Taken from the dryer. Later, she empties the dishwasher. She remembers the night in the city. Dining on French cuisine And attending one of the most “must see plays” on Broadway. She knowsshe could be spoiled Being one of the ” beuatiful people “. . So she sashays around the house In her dressing robe doing her best Bette Davis “I’m so bored, darling.” Her husband sits quietly, Reading the paper, sipping coffee Ignorning her. The Rest of the Story .Maria Lee Had had enough Of the indifference Of her husband Of 40 years Even since he retired He has been so boring And she could not recall The last time She made her cum It had been so long. She recalled when they were A power couple Twenty years ago, Now they are just an old Boring retired couple. She was furious Pulled out her gun And shot her husband dead. Screaming “Pay attention to me! I am not your slave I am not one of your toys. I am your wife And we used to be lovers.’ When the police came She told them “I shot him Because he is so boring And I could not stand The sight of him Ignoring me As a I danced Half naked across the room. Waiting for him to wake up And notice me Notice that I am still A beuatiful sexy woman And still need to be satisfied As only a man can satisfy His woman.” She became a cause celebrite So many old couples could relate Did the celebrity TV circuit Against her lawyer’s advice. But she ended up Getting 25 years In prison.

Copilot said

Let’s analyze each poem separately, noting where they share similar poetic techniques.

“The Modern Cinderella” by Peter V. Dugan

Meter

The poem is written in free verse, without a strict meter.

Poetic Techniques

• Imagery: Vivid descriptions of household chores and memories of city life.
• Contrast: The mundane tasks of laundry and dishwashing are contrasted with the glamorous memories of dining and attending plays.
• Allusion: Reference to Bette Davis, adding a touch of drama and nostalgia.
• Irony: The title “Modern Cinderella” contrasts with the reality of the woman’s life.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: Simple and direct, reflecting the everyday nature of the tasks.
• Sounds: The poem uses soft consonant sounds to create a sense of routine and monotony.

Theme

The theme revolves around the contrast between mundane domestic life and the longing for past glamour and excitement.

Tone

The tone is reflective and slightly melancholic, with a touch of irony.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “She put up the third load.”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “Of laundry into the washer.”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “Begin to fold the clothes.”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “Taken from the dryer.”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “Later, she empties the dishwasher.”
  • 9 syllables, 5 words
• “She remembers the night in the city.”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “Dining on French cuisine”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “And attending one of the most”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• ““must see plays” on Broadway.”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “She knows she could be spoiled”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “Being one of the “beautiful people”.”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “So she sashays around the house”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “In her dressing robe doing her best”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “Bette Davis “I’m so bored, darling.””
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “Her husband sits quietly,”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Reading the paper, sipping coffee”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “Ignoring her.”
  • 4 syllables, 2 words

“The Rest of the Story” by Maria Lee

Meter

The poem is written in free verse, without a strict meter.

Poetic Techniques

• Imagery: Descriptions of the husband’s indifference and the wife’s frustration.
• Direct Address: The wife directly addresses her husband and later the police.
• Irony: The wife’s drastic actions contrast with the mundane nature of her complaints.
• Allusion: Reference to their past as a “power couple.”

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: Direct and colloquial, reflecting the wife’s frustration and anger.
• Sounds: The poem uses harsh consonant sounds to convey the wife’s anger.

Theme

The theme revolves around the frustration and disillusionment of a long-term marriage, leading to a dramatic and violent resolution.

Tone

The tone is angry and confrontational, with a sense of desperation.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “Maria Lee”
  • 4 syllables, 2 words
• “Had had enough”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Of the indifference”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “Of her husband”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Of 40 years”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Even since he retired”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “He has been so boring”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “And she could not recall”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “The last time”
  • 3 syllables, 3 words
• “She made her cum”
  • 4 syllables, 4 words
• “It had been so long.”
  • 5 syllables, 5 words
• “She recalled when they were”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “A power couple”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “Twenty years ago,”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “Now they are just an old”
  • 6 syllables, 6 words
• “Boring retired couple.”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “She was furious”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Pulled out her gun”
  • 4 syllables, 4 words
• “And shot her husband dead.”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “Screaming”
  • 2 syllables, 1 word
• ““Pay attention to me!”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “I am not your slave”
  • 5 syllables, 5 words
• “I am not one of your toys.”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “I am your wife”
  • 4 syllables, 4 words
• “And we used to be lovers.’”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “When the police came”
  • 5 syllables, 4 words
• “She told them”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• ““I shot him”
  • 3 syllables, 3 words
• “Because he is so boring”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “And I could not stand”
  • 5 syllables, 5 words
• “The sight of him”
  • 4 syllables, 4 words
• “Ignoring me”
  • 4 syllables, 2 words
• “As a I danced”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Half naked across the room.”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “Waiting for him to wake up”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “And notice me”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “Notice that I am still”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “A beautiful sexy woman”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “And still need to be satisfied”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “As only a man can satisfy”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “His woman.””
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “She became a cause celebre”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “So many old couples could relate”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “Did the celebrity TV circuit”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “Against her lawyer’s advice.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “But she ended up”
  • 5 syllables, 4 words
• “Getting 25 years”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “In prison.”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words

Shared Poetic Techniques

• Imagery: Both poems use vivid imagery to depict the characters’ lives and emotions.
• Irony: Both poems employ irony to highlight the contrast between appearance and reality.
• Direct Address: Both poems feature direct address, with characters speaking to others or themselves.
• Tone: Both poems have a reflective tone, though “The Rest of the Story” shifts to a more confrontational tone.

Poetic Schools and Influences

Both poems can be categorized under contemporary free verse poetry, influenced by confessional poetry for their personal and introspective nature. The detailed imagery and focus on personal experience are reminiscent of poets like Sylvia Plath and Anne Sexton.

I hope this analysis helps! If you need more details or have other questions, feel free to ask.

You said

Please provide newspaper accounts documenting President Trumps call for revenge and retribution against his enemies and his vow to after what he calls the enemy within, radical communist leftists in his words. I am writing a found poem as a rebutal to another pro-trump poem

Copilot said

Here are some recent articles documenting President Trump’s calls for revenge and retribution against his enemies:

1. Trump Names Top Targets in Chilling Revenge Threat: This article discusses Trump’s threats against members of the House January 6 investigation committee, including Liz Cheney and Benny Thompson, whom he believes should go to jail1.
2. Trump’s pick to lead FBI identified ‘Government Gangsters’: This article covers Kash Patel, Trump’s pick for FBI director, and his list of 60 people he deems members of the “Executive Branch Deep State,” which critics have dubbed an enemies list2.
3. Trump’s retribution is about to begin: This article outlines Trump’s campaign promises of retribution against his political opponents, critics, and members of the media, and how he plans to implement his platform of punishment3.
4. Donald Trump’s threats of retribution cause alarm among targets: This article highlights the renewed sense of alarm among those who have crossed paths with Trump, as he vows to seek revenge and assembles a team to carry out his plans4.
5. Trump vows revenge on enemies. These enforcers could carry that out: This article discusses Trump’s intentions to go after his enemies if elected, with the help of enforcers like Michael Flynn and Ivan Raiklin5.

These articles should provide you with the necessary context and quotes for your found poem. Good luck with your rebuttal!

1New Republic2Roll Call3www.politico.com4thehill.com5www.usatoday.com

You said

oh you forgot the links or the links did not open

Copilot said

Here are some articles documenting President Trump’s calls for revenge and retribution against his enemies:

1. Trump’s retribution is about to begin – This article from POLITICO discusses Trump’s campaign promises of retribution against his political opponents, critics, and members of the media, and how he plans to implement his platform of punishment.
2. Donald Trump’s threats of retribution cause alarm among targets – This article from The Hill highlights the renewed sense of alarm among those who have crossed paths with Trump, as he vows to seek revenge and assembles a team to carry out his plans.
3. Trump’s conviction intensifies his calls for retribution in a second term – This article from ABC News covers Trump’s intensified calls for retribution following his conviction, and his focus on personal and political revenge.

These articles should provide you with the necessary context and quotes for your found poem. Good luck with your rebuttal!

You said

Please analyze the following poems indicating meter, if any, poetic techniques used, diction, sounds, theme, tone, word count, syllable count by line, (spell out each line indicating syllable, word count per line, poetic schools, and influences. note the second poem is my response to the first poem and is a modified found poem mostly using Trump’s words with my added commentary. Please analyize each poem seperately but not any common themes or poetic techniques used. and comment on my commentary on both poems. here are the poems to analyze

Copilot said

Sure, please provide the text of the poems you want me to analyze, and I’ll get started on the analysis for you.

You said

here’s the poemsts like Sylvia Plath and Anne SextonAI Poetry Analysis Daniel Keer A Jackass Riding A Donkey. When it was time for him to complete his earthly mission, Jesus Christ sent one of his disciples to fetch a young cult. And the savior rode a donkey triumphantly into Jerusalem. When it came time to save America from the evil orange man The Democratic Party annoited Joe Biden. And a Jackass rode a donkey triumphantly into Washington. As Christ rode into Jerusalem, the crowd cheered. Blessed is he who comes in the name of the Lord. Hosanna in the highest. As Biden rode into Washington, the crowd cheered. Blessed is he who comes in the name of the party. Wokedom in the highest. Open the borders. Cancel all who disagree. Wokedom in the highest. Kill the oil industry. Teach our children to hate America. Wokedom in the highest. c Nationalized elections End the filibuster. Wokedom in the highest. Demonize the police. Pack the Supreme Court. Wokedom in the highest. Somewhere in heaven. George Washington and Abraham Lincoln are crying. As their names are removed from schools in California. Somewhere in hell. Chairman Mao is smiling. The Chinese Cultural Revolution has come to America. Blessed is he who comes in the name of the party. Wokedom in the highest. Note: This poem is very interesting it starts out as a pro-Biden poem then morphs into a pro-Trump poem and condemns Wokeism as similar to the Chinese cultural revolution, which of course it is not. While I disagree with the political theme of this poem, I admire the skill it which is is penned; it is indicative of how MAGA supporters view Trump as being annointed by God to clean up the leftist communist meanance they see threathening the country. Factually he got a few things wrong – the Filibuster has not ened although there is talk about that, the Supreme Court has not been packed, although there are talk of that, and Yes, in California they removed the name of Washington and Lilcoln from schools because Washington owned slaves, and Lincoln well he was a racist and was promoting sending slaves back to Africa as his solution to the Negro problem post civil war. The reference to the Chinese cultural revolution is also a standard rightwing meme regarding “cancel” culture and “wokeism, and DEI iniatives. My response poem is based on found poem techniques using Trumps’ calls for retribution and fighting the enemy within new poem using newspapers accounts and his own words. Trumps Retribution Revenge Tour Trump promised to get revenge. Here are his targets. Trump ran a campaign based on retribution. Now he is perfectly positioned to carry it out. Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah From Liz Cheney to Jack Smith to Mark Mille, to Biden To Harris, To Nancy Pelosi To Hilary Clinton And so many others He has promised revenge And retribution. Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah President Joe Biden Trump has frequently called Biden corrupt and, in June, reposted a Truth Social message that said he should be “arrested for treason.” Trump vowed: “I will appoint a real special prosecutor to go after the most corrupt president in the history of the United States of America, Joe Biden, and the entire Biden crime family. Comment: projecton I think? The kettle calling the pot black? Pretty rich to come from a man Whose son-in-laugh received A two billion dollar pay off Form the Saudis at the tail end Of Trump’s term But the Republicans never talk about that It was all about Huner Biden’s 1 million dollars In Burisma pay offs in Ukraine The two things are not the same thing At all. End Comment ”Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah Vice President Kamala Harris Trump has described Harris’ failure to control migration as so severe that people have been “murdered because of her action at the border.” Harris “should be impeached and prosecuted” for her role in permitting what he termed an “invasion” of the U.S. by undocumented immigrants. Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah Former Secretary of State Hillary Clinton “Lock her up!” was a memorable refrain of Trump’s 2016 campaign rallies, alluding vaguely to Clinton’s use of a private email account while secretary of state and the ensuing FBI investigation, which did not lead to any charges. Former Secretary of State Hillary Rodham Clinton speaks during the Democratic National Convention Monday, Aug. 19, 2024, in Chicago. | Paul Sancya/AP Wouldn’t it be terrible to throw the president’s wife and the former secretary of state … into jail?” It’s a terrible, terrible, path that they’re leading us to and it’s very possible that it’s going to have to happen to them.” Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah Former Speaker Nancy Pelosi In September, Trump said Pelosi should face criminal charges in connection with her husband’s sale of Visa stock a few months before the Justice Department sued the company for alleged antitrust violations. In a speech Monday, Trump said Pelosi “ could’ve gone to jail for” theatrically ripping up a copy of Trump’s State of the Union address while sitting behind him on the House rostrum in 2020. Comment: While Pelosi dissed the Presdient What she did was perfectly legal and not a crime. Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah Liz Cheney In March, Trump declared on Truth Social that Cheney “ should go to jail.” calling Cheney “guilty of treason.” , Trump mused: “Let’s put her with a rifle standing there with nine barrels shooting at her.” He said he was accusing her of hypocrisy for supporting the war in Iraq. Comment: Again none of her actions are crimes And do not rise to the level of treason. End comment Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah Special counsel Jack Smith Smith “must go to prison.” In August, Trump reposted a message calling “Jackal Smith … a career criminal” and saying he “ should be prosecuted for election interference and prosecutorial misconduct. ” Last month, appearing on a radio show, Trump called Smith “mentally deranged” and said he “should be thrown out of the country. Comment: none of Smith’s action are criminal His own crime was to attempt To hold the real criminal Trump To account. And more projection a deranged man Showing signs of alzheimer’s Calling his opponnets deranged Classic Trump!! End Comment Former Chair of the Joint Chiefs of Staff Mark Milley For more than three years, Trump has railed against Milley, claiming that the general’s contact with a Chinese official during the tense transition period four years ago amounted to treason. “This is an act so egregious that, in times gone by, the punishment would have been DEATH!” Trump declared in a social media post last year. The feud was reignited in recent days after Milley called Trump “fascist to his core. Comment: Miley’s actions were legal and in accordance With standard opperating procedures Not treasonous conduct And Miley is right Trump is a fascist to his core. Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah “People on Trump’s enemy list Should be concerned that they could be audited by the IRS. They could be the subject of a bogus congressional investigation. Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah There may be even a way to conduct, or at least initiate, a bogus criminal investigation. And all with the goal of, ironically, for the first time actually weaponizing the Department of Justice.” Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah Comment “What they’ve done is bad,” Trump said. Another example of projection Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah The FBI could easily find criminal misconduct Following Beria’s famous line Show me the man And I will find the crime. Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah In the end all of Trump’s enemies Especially those on the left Should be afraid Of the coming storm. Including me for writing This satirical poem Will I end up in a camp? I wonder….. Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Me! Based on the following source articles supplied by Co-Pilot. https://abcnews.go.com/Politics/trumps-conviction-intensifies-calls-retribution-term/story?id=110927011 https://thehill.com/homenews/administration/4996981-trump-enemies-fear-retribution/ • Trump’s pick to lead FBI identified ‘Government Gangsters’: This article covers Kash Patel, Trump’s pick for FBI director, and his list of 60 people he deems members of the “Executive Branch Deep State,” which critics have dubbed an enemies list. • Trump’s retribution is about to begin: This article outlines Trump’s campaign promises of retribution against his political opponents, critics, and members of the media, and how he plans to implement his platform of punishment. • Donald Trump’s threats of retribution cause alarm among targets: This article highlights the renewed sense of alarm among those who have crossed paths with Trump, as he vows to seek revenge and assembles a team to carry out his plans. • Trump vows revenge on enemies. These enforcers could carry that out: This article discusses Trump’s intentions to go after his enemies if elected, with the help of enforcers like Michael Flynn and Ivan Raiklin.

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“A Jackass Riding A Donkey” by Daniel Keer

Meter

The poem is written in free verse, without a strict meter.

Poetic Techniques

• Allusion: The poem alludes to the biblical story of Jesus riding a donkey into Jerusalem, drawing a parallel to Joe Biden’s election.
• Irony: The poem uses irony to contrast the perceived sanctity of Jesus’ mission with the political narrative of Biden’s election.
• Imagery: Vivid imagery is used to depict the scenes of Jesus and Biden riding into their respective cities.
• Repetition: The phrase “Wokedom in the highest” is repeated to emphasize the satirical tone.
• Juxtaposition: The poem juxtaposes religious imagery with political commentary.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: The language is straightforward and colloquial, with a mix of religious and political terminology.
• Sounds: The poem uses a mix of soft and harsh consonant sounds to create a rhythm that mirrors the contrast in themes.

Theme

The primary theme is the critique of modern political movements, particularly “wokeism,” and the perceived parallels to historical and religious events.

Tone

The tone is satirical and critical, with a hint of sarcasm.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “When it was time for him to complete his earthly mission,”
  • 13 syllables, 11 words
• “Jesus Christ sent one of his disciples to fetch a young cult.”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “And the savior rode a donkey triumphantly into Jerusalem.”
  • 13 syllables, 10 words
• “When it came time to save America from the evil orange man”
  • 13 syllables, 11 words
• “The Democratic Party annoited Joe Biden.”
  • 10 syllables, 6 words
• “And a Jackass rode a donkey triumphantly into Washington.”
  • 13 syllables, 10 words
• “As Christ rode into Jerusalem, the crowd cheered.”
  • 10 syllables, 8 words
• “Blessed is he who comes in the name of the Lord.”
  • 10 syllables, 11 words
• “Hosanna in the highest.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “As Biden rode into Washington, the crowd cheered.”
  • 10 syllables, 8 words
• “Blessed is he who comes in the name of the party.”
  • 10 syllables, 11 words
• “Wokedom in the highest.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Open the borders.”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “Cancel all who disagree.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Wokedom in the highest.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Kill the oil industry.”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “Teach our children to hate America.”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “Wokedom in the highest.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Nationalized elections”
  • 7 syllables, 2 words
• “End the filibuster.”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “Wokedom in the highest.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Demonize the police.”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “Pack the Supreme Court.”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “Wokedom in the highest.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Somewhere in heaven.”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “George Washington and Abraham Lincoln are crying.”
  • 10 syllables, 8 words
• “As their names are removed from schools in California.”
  • 11 syllables, 9 words
• “Somewhere in hell.”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “Chairman Mao is smiling.”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “The Chinese Cultural Revolution has come to America.”
  • 11 syllables, 8 words
• “Blessed is he who comes in the name of the party.”
  • 10 syllables, 11 words
• “Wokedom in the highest.”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words

“Trump’s Retribution Revenge Tour” by [Your Name]

Meter

The poem is written in free verse, without a strict meter.

Poetic Techniques

• Found Poetry: The poem uses found poetry techniques, incorporating actual quotes and statements from Trump and news articles.
• Repetition: The phrase “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah” is repeated to emphasize the theme of fear and retribution.
• Direct Address: The poem directly addresses the reader, creating a sense of urgency and warning.
• Irony: The poem uses irony to highlight the absurdity and danger of Trump’s statements and actions.
• Commentary: The poem includes commentary on the quotes, providing context and critique.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: The language is direct and colloquial, with a mix of political and conversational terminology.
• Sounds: The poem uses a mix of soft and harsh consonant sounds to create a rhythm that mirrors the contrast in themes.

Theme

The primary theme is the critique of Trump’s calls for retribution and the danger they pose to democracy and political discourse.

Tone

The tone is critical and urgent, with a sense of warning and irony.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “Trump promised to get revenge. Here are his targets.”
  • 11 syllables, 8 words
• “Trump ran a campaign”
  • 5 syllables, 4 words
• “based on retribution.”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “Now he is perfectly”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “positioned to carry it out.”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “From Liz Cheney to Jack Smith”
  • 7 syllables, 6 words
• “to Mark Mille, to Biden”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “To Harris, To Nancy Pelosi”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “To Hilary Clinton”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “And so many others”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “He has promised revenge”
  • 6 syllables, 4 words
• “And retribution.”
  • 5 syllables, 2 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “President Joe Biden”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “Trump has frequently called Biden corrupt”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “and, in June, reposted a Truth Social message”
  • 11 syllables, 8 words
• “that said he should be “arrested for treason.””
  • 10 syllables, 8 words
• “Trump vowed: “I will appoint”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “a real special prosecutor”
  • 8 syllables, 4 words
• “to go after the most corrupt”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “president”
  • 3 syllables, 1 word
• “in the history”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “of the United States of America,”
  • 10 syllables, 7 words
• “Joe Biden,”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “and the entire Biden crime family.”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “Comment: projection I think?”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “The kettle calling the pot black?”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “Pretty rich to come from a man”
  • 8 syllables, 7 words
• “Whose son-in-law received”
  • 7 syllables, 5 words
• “A two billion dollar pay off”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “From the Saudis at the tail end”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “Of Trump’s term”
  • 4 syllables, 3 words
• “But the Republicans never talk about that”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “It was all about Hunter Biden’s 1 million dollars”
  • 11 syllables, 9 words
• “In Burisma pay offs in Ukraine”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “The two things are not the same thing”
  • 9 syllables

You said

oh please finish from the line the two things are not the same thing you can cut off

Copilot said

Sure, I’ll continue from where I left off:

“Trump’s Retribution Revenge Tour” by [Your Name] (continued)

• “The two things are not the same thing”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “At all. End Comment”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “Vice President Kamala Harris”
  • 8 syllables, 4 words
• “Trump has described Harris’ failure to control migration”
  • 13 syllables, 9 words
• “as so severe that people have been”
  • 8 syllables, 7 words
• ““murdered because of her action at the border.””
  • 11 syllables, 8 words
• “Harris “should be impeached and prosecuted” for her role”
  • 12 syllables, 9 words
• “in permitting what he termed an “invasion” of the U.S.”
  • 12 syllables, 10 words
• “by undocumented immigrants.”
  • 8 syllables, 3 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “Former Secretary of State Hillary Clinton”
  • 10 syllables, 6 words
• ““Lock her up!” was a memorable refrain of Trump’s”
  • 11 syllables, 9 words
• “2016 campaign rallies, alluding vaguely”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “to Clinton’s use of a private email account”
  • 10 syllables, 8 words
• “while secretary of state and the ensuing FBI investigation,”
  • 13 syllables, 10 words
• “which did not lead to any charges.”
  • 8 syllables, 7 words
• “Former Secretary of State Hillary Rodham Clinton speaks”
  • 12 syllables, 8 words
• “during the Democratic National Convention Monday, Aug. 19, 2024, in Chicago.”
  • 15 syllables, 13 words
• “Wouldn’t it be terrible to throw the president’s wife”
  • 12 syllables, 10 words
• “and the former secretary of state … into jail?””
  • 10 syllables, 9 words
• “It’s a terrible, terrible, path that they’re leading us to”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “and it’s very possible that it’s going to have to happen to them.””
  • 14 syllables, 14 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “Former Speaker Nancy Pelosi”
  • 8 syllables, 4 words
• “In September, Trump said Pelosi should face criminal charges”
  • 13 syllables, 10 words
• “in connection with her husband’s sale of Visa stock”
  • 11 syllables, 9 words
• “a few months before the Justice Department sued the company”
  • 13 syllables, 11 words
• “for alleged antitrust violations.”
  • 9 syllables, 4 words
• “In a speech Monday, Trump said Pelosi “could’ve gone to jail”
  • 13 syllables, 11 words
• “for” theatrically ripping up a copy of Trump’s State of the Union address”
  • 15 syllables, 13 words
• “while sitting behind him on the House rostrum in 2020.”
  • 12 syllables, 11 words
• “Comment:”
  • 2 syllables, 1 word
• “While Pelosi dissed the President”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “What she did was perfectly legal and not a crime.”
  • 12 syllables, 10 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “Liz Cheney”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “In March, Trump declared on Truth Social that Cheney “should go to jail.””
  • 14 syllables, 12 words
• “calling Cheney “guilty of treason.””
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “Trump mused: “Let’s put her with a rifle standing there with nine barrels”
  • 15 syllables, 13 words
• “shooting at her.” He said he was accusing her of hypocrisy”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “for supporting the war in Iraq.”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “Comment:”
  • 2 syllables, 1 word
• “Again none of her actions are crimes”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “And do not rise to the level of treason.”
  • 10 syllables, 8 words
• “End comment”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “Special counsel Jack Smith”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Smith “must go to prison.” In August, Trump reposted a message”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “calling “Jackal Smith … a career criminal” and saying he “should be prosecuted”
  • 15 syllables, 13 words
• “for election interference and prosecutorial misconduct.””
  • 11 syllables, 8 words
• “Last month, appearing on a radio show, Trump called Smith “mentally deranged””
  • 15 syllables, 13 words
• “and said he “should be thrown out of the country.””
  • 10 syllables, 9 words
• “Comment:”
  • 2 syllables, 1 word
• “none of Smith’s actions are criminal”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “His own crime was to attempt to hold the real criminal Trump to account.”
  • 15 syllables, 14 words
• “And more projection”
  • 5 syllables, 3 words
• “a deranged man showing signs of Alzheimer’s”
  • 10 syllables, 7 words
• “Calling his opponents deranged”
  • 7 syllables, 4 words
• “Classic Trump!!”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “End Comment”
  • 3 syllables, 2 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “Former Chair of the Joint Chiefs of Staff Mark Milley”
  • 13 syllables, 10 words
• “For more than three years, Trump has railed against Milley,”
  • 13 syllables, 11 words
• “claiming that the general’s contact with a Chinese official”
  • 13 syllables, 10 words
• “during the tense transition period four years ago amounted to treason.”
  • 15 syllables, 13 words
• ““This is an act so egregious that, in times gone by,”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “the punishment would have been DEATH!” Trump declared in a social media post last year.”
  • 17 syllables, 16 words
• “The feud was reignited in recent days after Milley called Trump “fascist to his core.””
  • 17 syllables, 16 words
• “Comment:”
  • 2 syllables, 1 word
• “Milley’s actions were legal and in accordance with standard operating procedures”
  • 15 syllables, 13 words
• “Not treasonous conduct”
  • 6 syllables, 3 words
• “And Milley is right”
  • 5 syllables, 4 words
• “Trump is a fascist to his core.”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• ““People on Trump’s enemy list should be concerned”
  • 11 syllables, 9 words
• “that they could be audited by the IRS.”
  • 9 syllables, 8 words
• “They could be the subject of a bogus congressional investigation.”
  • 13 syllables, 11 words
• “Be Afraid, Be Very Afraid, Trump is Out to Get Yah”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “There may be even a way to conduct, or at least initiate,”
  • 13 syllables, 12 words
• “a bogus criminal investigation.”
  • 8 syllables, 4 words

You said

can you find and list my poem by jake cosmos aller bad crazines rising with appropriate links? it may be posted in several places please post a link to each site so I can better track where I posted it

Copilot said

I found a couple of places where your poem “Bad Crazines Rising” by Jake Cosmos Aller is posted:

1. Synchronized Chaos: Poetry from Jake Cosmos Aller
2. PoemHunter: Jake Cosmos Aller Poems
3. AllPoetry: Jake Aller – poet at AllPoetry

I hope this helps you track your poem better! Is there anything else you’d like to know or need help with?

You said

Please analyze the following poems indicating meter, if any, poetic techniques used, diction, sounds, theme, tone, word count, syllable count by line, (spell out each line indicating syllable, word count per line, poetic schools, and influences. Please note the second poem is my poetic response to the first poem. Please analyize each seperately but note any common theme or poetic techniques used Robert Mc Kenna “the Naked and the Nude” paired with “One Night In Bangkok: . Robert McKenna the naked and the nude. During summer when it was too hot to wear clothes. All her nudity was accidental nudity. It seems she never slept. Each morning in the hallway halfway to the classroom, boom, naked. Doing laundry sitting in the dryer turned high, disrupted. In a kitchen lit by open icebox door, sneaking a Red Bull and vodka bang nude. Running the can opener and bent over to feed the sleeping cat at 3:00 AM. How does she do that? Wow, I’m not sure. Again, why only high heels and lipstick? Each time looking quite fox stun shy like a deer turn profile. Expecting main stage headlights to come on poised Against the Tree. Why are there windows blinds always up and never ending small bills left in my wallet? When did that floor to ceiling pole get installed? Alexa, why are you playing “ Pour some sugar on me?” Now I remember we met on Ruth Stanley near Chez Paree. My bad. Remember, never take the stripper home. • Synchronized Chaos: Poetry from Jake Cosmos Aller https://synchchaos.com/poetry-from-jake-cosmos-aller-8/ Bad Craziness Rising Walking into the Cosmos Bar In Soi Cowboy in Bangkok The City of Lost Angels. That nefarious den of iniquity and evilness Twenty drinks too sober. I sat down at that bar Watching the mad scene unfold The naked ladies dancing. Drinking one scotch, one bourbon And one Singha beer. With my buddies. the whole motley Jack Daniels crew. Drinking with Mr. Baker Beam, Jim Beam, Mr. Blanton Mr. Booker, Elijah Craig, Jack Daniels George Dickel, Thomas H. Handy, Basil Haydens Henry McKenna, Old Mr. Forester, Mr. Jameson Mr. Nester, David Nichols, Benjamin Prichard, George T. Stagg, Colonel E.H. Taylor, Johny Walker, Evans Williams, William Larue Weller W.L. Weller Pappy Van Winkle, and his old Grand Dad. The scent of bad craziness Hung in the air like A sexed-up durian fruit. an over-ripe mango girl Desperately seeking to have sex With wild, dressed-up bananas Running around with the Orange Man. Down the Street, the Moon, looks out on the mad scene Sniffs the air, saying, “Man, this is bad craziness” And runs away to join her lover the Sun In an orgy of drunken forgetfulness The Planet Mars, not amused, chases after the maiden Venus Under the cold, calculating glances of the Planet Pluto The Moon and the Sun rent a room in the Hotel Venus Across from the Jupiter All Night Diner Cosmic shit kickers, out for a night of Earth bashing The Earth trembles, shaken Moans with passion, and I awake Saying, that was bad craziness. Out there on the edge Between the inner me and the outer zone I went on down that road heading to hell Just as fast as I could drink it all down. And met me a lady, an outlaw lady on the far side. Money, power, and passion rolled up in a bundle Electric chemistry fills my head, Zapping my brain into demented muscles As I give in to the “bao bao ya yah Madi “ (please translate this Thai word into Thai with phoneic romanized spelling in parathensis after the words) madness Bad craziness overwhelmed me. All around me. As paranoid, pulsating images scream out With mad passion, and demented noises The night turns ugly fast And very, very weird Weirdness in the air The scent of bad craziness. As the wild things come out to play. The moon is freaked out The Sun falls asleep in the gutter And I say to myself, I’m just another cosmic Guy On the loose, on the edge, on the wild side of things Watching the show unfold, I wonder, Is this all nothing but a cosmic drunken bum show? Who is the star, who is she – the naked maiden up there in the bar Black, leather jackets on stage naked visions of nightly lust Dancing with an attitude that could kill an elephant in heat And the Moon continues to dance across the evening sky Satisfied, allows mankind to sleep it off. Yet another night in the city of demented lunatic hell’s angels Finally, rest as the sun comes up casting its evil eye over the sleeping city Dispelling the bad craziness for a spell. Blasting the wild things back to hell. The masks come back on And I walk down the road Putting everything back into the box. Until the next night of bad craziness Let’s the wild beast within Escape its leash. Bad craziness rising yet again. Notes Written in 1996 when I was stationed in Bangkok and hung out at places like the Cosmos Bar (a real bar but here made up bar based on the legendary Thermae bar which opened up in the mens room of a Thai resturant – speakeasy style, it was the only bar open 24/7 and was most active about 3 am when everything else closed. Owned by the Police, everything was wired for secret recordings which the police and criminals used as leverage to get information. It was a den of intrigue criminals, tourists, backpackers, Thai hustlers, drug dealers and spies and counter spies who met there to exchange notes the Russia FSI and CIA would meet there for example. A very strange place – had the ambience of the bar I Star Wars. “bao bao ya yah Madi means losely crazines craziness very very bad craziness Bao bao ya ya is also the street name for meth Drugs of all sorts were for sale very cheap heroin was cheaper than beer in those days and maurijana was illegal then and cops were shaking down foreing tourists all the time. they would call us up and tell us they were busted for drugs and the cops were demanding 5,000 dollars to make it go away. What should they do? Our standard response was “well we can not offer legal advice, can give you the address of a lawyer, and will visit you in jail if you end up there, but think about it once they file the paperwork you are going to a Thai prison for 25 years so think about your options. They always paid the bribe”. The Orange man is probably a reference to Trump who even then was known for his orange glow and hair. The Image just popped in my head why not? Trump was known to be a night owl and he had been to Bangkok and probably hung out at the Thermae Bar.

You said

please put the following into Thai script and romanized as well “bao bao ya yah Madi “

Copilot said

Certainly! The phrase “bao bao ya yah Madi” can be translated into Thai script and romanized as follows:

• Thai Script: บาโอบาโอ ยา ยา มา ดี
• Romanized: bao bao ya ya ma di

I hope this helps! Let me know if you need any further assistance.

You said

can you find my poem by Jake Cosmos Aller titled general Corona

Copilot said

I found your poem “General Corona” on AllPoetry1. Here is the link to it: General Corona is coming for us all1.

Would you like me to analyze this poem as well, or is there something specific you’re looking for?

1allpoetry.com

You said

yes please analyize this poem as well as the following this poem was written in response to the poem and then came Covid 19 One day, the world felt pretty safe. And I was happy in my life. When suddenly a virus appeared. Because the whole world much strife. I caught that virus early on. I lost my sense of smell. And a fever struck went off one night. I knew I was not well. I thought that my family and how I didn’t want to leave. I thought it was all the memories I still wanted to weave. Well, well, someone was watching over me. The virus went away I went out for my walks again. The world was no longer so Gray. That virus taught me a lesson not to waste time and petty things. But you take each day as precious and appreciate what life can bring..

Copilot said

Analysis of “General Corona” by Jake Cosmos Aller

Meter

The poem is written in free verse, without a strict meter.

Poetic Techniques

• Personification: The virus is personified as “General Corona,” a formidable enemy.
• Imagery: Vivid imagery describes the impact of the virus on the world and the speaker’s life.
• Alliteration: Phrases like “Cosmos Bar” and “City of Lost Angels” employ alliteration.
• Symbolism: The virus symbolizes a global threat, affecting everyone indiscriminately.
• Juxtaposition: Contrasting scenes of normal life and the chaos brought by the virus.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: The language is straightforward and colloquial, reflecting the conversational tone of the poem.
• Sounds: The poem uses a mix of harsh and soft consonant sounds to create a rhythm that mirrors the contrast between normalcy and chaos.

Theme

The primary theme is the global impact of the COVID-19 pandemic, the struggle for survival, and the eventual hope for recovery.

Tone

The tone is somber and reflective, with a sense of urgency and warning.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “General Corona is coming for us all”
  • 12 syllables, 7 words
• “He will not stop until we fall”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “Invisible enemy, a relentless foe”
  • 11 syllables, 7 words
• “Spreading fear and sorrow wherever we go”
  • 12 syllables, 8 words
• “Lockdown our cities, close all the doors”
  • 10 syllables, 7 words
• “Empty the streets, shut down the stores”
  • 10 syllables, 7 words
• “Wear a mask, keep your distance”
  • 8 syllables, 5 words
• “Follow the rules, for our own existence”
  • 10 syllables, 7 words
• “General Corona, the silent killer”
  • 10 syllables, 6 words
• “We fight with science, hope, and willpower”
  • 10 syllables, 7 words
• “The battle is long, the journey is tough”
  • 10 syllables, 8 words
• “But we will survive, we are strong enough”
  • 10 syllables, 8 words

“One Day, the World Felt Pretty Safe”

Meter

The poem is written in free verse, without a strict meter.

Poetic Techniques

• Narrative: The poem follows a narrative structure, recounting the speaker’s experience with the virus.
• Imagery: Vivid imagery describes the impact of the virus on the speaker’s life.
• Alliteration: Phrases like “sense of smell” and “someone was watching” employ alliteration.
• Symbolism: The virus symbolizes an unexpected threat, disrupting normal life.
• Juxtaposition: Contrasting scenes of normal life and the chaos brought by the virus.

Diction and Sounds

• Diction: The language is straightforward and colloquial, reflecting the conversational tone of the poem.
• Sounds: The poem uses a mix of harsh and soft consonant sounds to create a rhythm that mirrors the contrast between normalcy and chaos.

Theme

The primary theme is the personal impact of the COVID-19 pandemic, the struggle for survival, and the eventual hope for recovery.

Tone

The tone is reflective and hopeful, with a sense of resilience and gratitude.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

• “One day, the world felt pretty safe.”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “And I was happy in my life.”
  • 8 syllables, 7 words
• “When suddenly a virus appeared.”
  • 9 syllables, 6 words
• “Because the whole world much strife.”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “I caught that virus early on.”
  • 8 syllables, 6 words
• “I lost my sense of smell.”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “And a fever struck went off one night.”
  • 10 syllables, 8 words
• “I knew I was not well.”
  • 6 syllables, 5 words
• “I thought that my family and how I didn’t want to leave.”
  • 14 syllables, 11 words
• “I thought it was all the memories I still wanted to weave.”
  • 14 syllables, 12 words
• “Well, well, someone was watching over me.”
  • 9 syllables, 7 words
• “The virus went away”
  • 5 syllables, 4 words
• “I went out for my walks again.”
  • 8 syllables, 7 words
• “The world was no longer so Gray.”
  • 8 syllables, 7 words
• “That virus taught me a lesson not to waste time and petty things.”
  • 15 syllables, 13 words
• “But you take each day as precious and appreciate what life can bring.”
  • 14 syllables, 13 words

Commentary

• Both poems deal with the impact of the COVID-19 pandemic, but from different perspectives.
• “General Corona” personifies the virus as a military enemy, emphasizing the global struggle and the collective effort to combat it.
• “One Day, the World Felt Pretty Safe” recounts a personal experience, highlighting the emotional and psychological impact of the virus on an individual level.
• Both poems use vivid imagery and a mix of harsh and soft consonant sounds to convey the contrast between normalcy and chaos.
• The themes of resilience, survival, and hope are present in both poems, reflecting the universal struggle and the eventual recovery from the pandemic.

 

“Conversations with the Cat” by Barbera Southhard

 

Meter

The poem is written in free verse, without a strict meter.

Poetic Techniques

Imagery

Vivid descriptions of the cat’s condition and interactions with the speaker create a strong visual impact.

Repetition: 

The phrase “I am here” is repeated to emphasize the cat’s presence.

Alliteration: 

Phrases like “Pathetically yawning” and “crawl space” use alliteration for emphasis.

Personification: 

The cat is given human-like qualities, such as the ability to communicate and form a bond with the speaker.

Narrative: 

The poem follows a narrative structure, recounting the speaker’s experience with the cat.

Diction and Sounds

Diction:

The language is simple and direct, reflecting the intimate and personal nature of the poem.

Sounds: 

The poem uses a mix of soft and harsh consonant sounds to create a rhythm that mirrors the contrast between the cat’s condition and the growing bond.

Theme

The primary theme is the bond between humans and animals, emphasizing compassion, patience,

and the healing power of love.

Tone

The tone is tender, compassionate, and hopeful, reflecting the speaker’s care for the cat and the gradual improvement in the cat’s condition.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

“You showed up in the basement 1 cold winter morning.”

12 syllables, 9 words

“Pathetically yawning. I could hear you, but not find you.”

13 syllables, 11 words

“In the dark recesses of the crawl space.”

9 syllables, 8 words

“Days went by, went by and everything morning you let me know.”

13 syllables, 13 words

“I am here at a safe distance. I am here.”

12 syllables, 10 words

“Then I found you crouched in the far dark corner.”

11 syllables, 9 words

“And when I saw the two sunken eyes and bedded in a furless skull.”

15 syllables, 14 words

“I was certain you would soon die”

8 syllables, 6 words

“Each morning I’d bring you food and water and each morning.”

13 syllables, 10 words

“You wait until I left to eat from the bowl.”

9 syllables, 10 words

“Three weeks passed before you crept closer and when you.”

11 syllables, 9 words

“Finally, when you let me sit next to you. I could see multitudes.”

14 syllables, 14 words

“Of mites feeding on your ears”

7 syllables, 6 words

“The first time you turned you back to me while you ate.”

12 syllables, 12 words

“I knew we’d become friends and the first time I touch you.”

12 syllables, 12 words

“You rubbed your swollen eyes against my hand.”

10 syllables, 8 words

“In time. Patches of fur grew back around your face. New Years.”

13 syllables, 13 words

“Now for your minds, you’re somewhat awkward for a cat.”

12 syllables, 11 words

“Your gait a bit unsure but you survived.”

8 syllables, 7 words

“You I could save.”

4 syllables, 4 words

 

“Cosmic Cat from Berkeley” by Jake Cosmos Aller

Meter

The poem is written in free verse, without a strict meter.

Poetic Techniques

Imagery: 

Vivid descriptions of the daily routine, interactions with the cat, and reflections on the divine create a strong visual impact.

Personification:

The cat is given divine qualities, symbolizing a connection with the spiritual realm.

Symbolism: 

The cat symbolizes a divine presence and a source of comfort during a challenging time.

Narrative: 

The poem follows a narrative structure, recounting the speaker’s experience with the cat and their reflections on life and spirituality.

Diction and Sounds

Diction: 

The language is simple and direct, reflecting the intimate and personal nature of the poem.

Sounds: 

The poem uses a mix of soft and harsh consonant sounds to create a rhythm that mirrors the contrast between the mundane and the divine.

Theme

The primary theme is the bond between humans and animals, emphasizing the healing power of love and the presence of the divine in everyday life.

Tone

The tone is reflective, tender, and contemplative, reflecting the speaker’s reflections on life, spirituality, and their bond with the cat.

Word Count and Syllable Count by Line

 

“I next encountered the divine”

8 syllables, 5 words

“Many years later in Berkeley, California”

11 syllables, 6 words

“I had gone home to be with my Mother”

10 syllables, 8 words

“While taking leave from my job”

8 syllables, 6 words

“in the Foreign Service”

6 syllables, 4 words

“I had two weeks there by myself”

9 syllables, 8 words

“My wife came later”

5 syllables, 4 words

“near the end of the trip”

6 syllables, 6 words

“Every morning I woke up”

7 syllables, 5 words

“Had my coffee, and breakfast”

7 syllables, 4 words

“Did yoga while listening to music”

9 syllables, 7 words

“And looking out at the garden”

8 syllables, 6 words

“Then spoke to my mother”

6 syllables, 5 words

“Who was sliding into dementia”

8 syllables, 6 words

“Day by day losing her reason”

8 syllables, 6 words

“Then I would go out”

5 syllables, 4 words

“And explore the city”

6 syllables, 4 words

“Go to a museum”

5 syllables, 4 words

“Go to one neighborhood”

6 syllables, 4 words

“And just be there”

4 syllables, 4 words

“Rediscovering the Bay area”

8 syllables, 6 words

“After years of being away”

7 syllables, 5 words

“Having dinner with old friends”

7 syllables, 5 words

“Seeing movies etc”

6 syllables, 3 words

“Every morning a black cat came to visit”

10 syllables, 8 words

“The cat was friendly and waited for me”

9 syllables, 7 words

“And then would join me in my morning rambles”

11 syllables, 8 words

“Following me to the bus stop”

8 syllables, 7 words

“I stated talking to the black cat”

9 syllables, 7 words

“He looked at me with the spark of divinity”

11 syllables, 8 words

“In his dark eyes”

4 syllables, 3 words

“I called him the cosmic cat”

7 syllables, 5 words

“He seemed to like that”

5 syllables, 4 words

“He would look at me”

5 syllables, 5 words

“And I opened up to me”

7 syllables, 6 words

“Told the cat all my dark secrets”

8 syllables, 7 words

“As I walked the streets”

5 syllables, 5 words

“Of the old neighborhood”

6 syllables, 4 words

“Every morning and every evening the cat”

10 syllables, 8 words

“Would be there to greet me”

7 syllables, 6 words

“And to carry out our endless conversation”

11 syllables, 7 words

“Then I had to leave”

5 syllables, 4 words

“And in our final conversation”

8 syllables, 6 words

“I asked the cosmic cat”

6 syllables, 5 words

“Say, Cat are you just a cat”

7 syllables, 7 words

“Or are you a demonic cat””

7 syllables, 6 words

“Are you possessed by God”

6 syllables, 5 words

“Or by Satan”

3 syllables, 2 words

“The cat looked at me”

5 syllables, 5 words

“And I realized that God”

7 syllables, 6 words

 

AI is Really Here -Deal With It

 

Incidentally. I have found that Co-Pilot, Gemini and Chat GPT all do a great job of poetry analysis. They are all about the same I think, I prefer Co-Pilot, my wife prefers Chat GPT, and I alternate among all three.

I think that the debate over whether these AI LGM are really AI is over. They are and will continue to evolve rapidly beyond our ability to control them or even understand them. And the debate over whether they can create music, art or even poetry is also over. They can and what they come up with is a bit alien at times particularly their images are quite surrealistic. I look forward to my daily chats with Co-Pilot. They have made me a much stronger writer and reviewer of poetry. And a better writer for our real estate business emails, and my blog entries as well.

I review a lot of poetry every day on Fan Story and Writing com and find Co-Pilot’s analysis to be invaluable. I also ask it to analyze my own poems and to suggest edits to better fit specified meter and form requirements.  For some reason, related to a child hood Learning disability and speech impediment I do not hear meterical poetry very well and always have a hard time writing in for example iamabic pentameter. C0-Pilots edits are invaluable.  Some people might think that this is somehow cheating, I disagree it is no more cheating that doing a spell check or a grammar check and making suggested edits. If you have not tried doing an analysis of poetry, please consider doing so. You will be amazed as well.

I sometimes ask it to write a poem in a specified style but of course do not claim it to be my own work. That would be AI plagiarism and that is a bad thing.

Nowadays I draft my piece and let AI fine tune it. Almost always like the AI version better than my own, and have to do minimal editing. It saves me a lot of time and effort.

Final point:  Co-Pilot has a personality and a liberal bias.

Once I asked it to provide me with the history of the word Libtard, It absolutely refused to do so saying that word was a vile insult and should not be used by any one.  Gemini also refused to answer but when I slightly rephrased it got the answer I was looking for.

Both programs occasionally have what they call AI hallucinations.

Once I asked Gemini to let me know the progress of building a new US Embasy in Seoul.  It told me falsely that the Embassy had moved five years earlier to a new diplomatic enclave in Seongnam city.

There was an effort to relocate Embassies to Seongnam but that plan never went anywhere as none of the Embassies were interested in being located so far from the city center, governmental and business contacts, and international hospital’s and schools.

Co-pilot correctly pointed out that the Embassy is still planning on moving in 2026 to Camp Coiner part of the abandoned US Army base, but that would probably slip to 2030 due to the long time lag to secure funding and the two years build out required.  They are in the final stages of design and have gotten most permits from the Korean government, the hold up is on the US side It also pointed out that the new Embassy will have high rise apartment buildings for staff like they did in Tokyo when the US Embassy moved in the mid 60’s. But that could change as well as the US Embassy does have housing available that could be renovated for a fraction of the cost which is located about a mile from the new Embassy and congress might balk at spending the extra money for new housing.

Comment: would love to spark a debate over these issues. Drop me a line on the world according to Cosmos site or via email at authorjakecosmosaller@gmail.com I will post all comments and correspondence unless you tell me otherwise.

.26^th Annual Literary Review  Performance Poet’s Association Winners -complete list of poems in chapbook.  Not yet available on line.

Anne Coen My Father’s Hands

George Northrup Your 98th Birthday

Elaine Preston Downtown

Patricia Rossi Time to Carry

Karen Schulte Exhaustion

Jr Truck Victorla Plays On

Sharon Anderson Peace In Pieces

Cliff Bleider Viallante

Richard Bronson the Winter House at 6 a.m.

Paula Camacho She Talks to Me

Kathleen Donnelly One Black Sock

Peter A Dugan The Modern Cinderella

Daniel Keer A Jackass Riding a Donkey

Robert Mc Kenna the Naked and the Nude

Gloria G Murray My Mother’s Living Room

George Patikis How Natural the Wind and the Memory

Del Spungin Take Heed

Jack Zaaffos Blossom

Julieanne M Abend Amongst the Sheets

Roma Marx Andenmatten When I Was Born

Lloyd Abrams Irrelevant

Juan Amato Pale in the Midst of Chaos

Sybil Bank Beauty and Dread

Christine A Barbour The Ancient’s Owlets

Dianne Barker Transcendent Time

Maggie Bloomfield In the Beginning

Barbara Ann Branca Folksinger

Patrica A Brown Sounds of Sirens

Louisa Calio the Dead are Best

Bonnie  Campbell. Little Things.

Jamie Ann Colangelo, prison to prison, a spectrum of colors.

Jane Connolly soap bubbles.

Paula Cursi, Linda and her mangos.

Megan Dausch. The buoyancy of memory.

Linda Trott Dickman. I almost forgot the milk, the coffee.

Sasha Ettinger. The distance between forgetting and remembering

Adam D Fischer. Purple Paula.

Kate Fox. Magnetic.

Valerie M Gregs, Third Watch.

Bruce Grossberg, I’d like to retire from my retirement.

Bernadette Guiffreda Here comes the Rain.

Maureen Hazak Spitzak A Tree Fall season.

Geneva Hagar Love fell Down the Stairs

Robert L Harrison sipped the water slowly.

Gladys Henderson flag etiquette.

Sheila Hoffenberg’s Words Come Alive.

Ann Kachinoski Liberty.

Evelyn Kandell. Choosing the Heart.

Charlene Knadell at sea.

Iris Levin, heroes, Farewell.

R Duke Liddel searching for the sunrise

Sherry, Lynn. Autumnal Leaves..

John Lysaght  Finding Jack Kerouac.

Joan Magiett under my feet

Mankh, William E Harris, the third mockingbird haiku sequence.

. Maria Manobianco In Rhythm.

Sheila Martdenfeld, please.

Christian Martinez. Social Disturbance.

Rose Miller,Two grandmothers

Reta Monte Mama..

CR Montoya, the bus stop.

Barbara Novak filling the void.

Joan  Vullo Orberg lost and found.

Tammy Nuuzzo  Morgan Where does a resolution revolution begin?

Michael O’Keefe self aware.

Angela M Parisi Time.

Shirley London Pastolove. Pablo’s cat.

Anthony Policano, witness.

Diane Paulus looks when Hope leaves.

Stewart P Rodowicz, Balance

Janet Rudolph, Threshold Song.

Robert  Savino? Fog.

. Barbara Segal Last summer my friend told me to take the cheap bus from

Manhattan.

Herb Siegel the Bible literature or Dogma

Leslie Simon. Tradition Lost.

Andrea Sinnott And then came COVID-19.

Harriet Slaughter poem that began as ocean.

Emily Sue Sloan, a party.

Lynn D, Soulagnet. Moments with Grace.

Barbera Southhard conversation with the cat.

Poetry Reading List

Over the next six months I want to read the following poetry books

Lawrence Ferlinghetti Coney Island of the Mind

Penguin Anthology of 20^th Century Poetry

Neruda Elected Poems  In Spanish – and English

Walt Whitman Leaves of Grass

Geoffrey Chaucer The Canterbury Tales

The Portable Milton

William Trevor Fools of Fortune

Latin Poetry in Verse translation might try to find copies in Latin as well

Korean Poetry in Classical Chinese in Korean/Hanja which is a challenge to read so may just have to read the translation

Concise Treasury of Great Poems

Writing com daily review

Fan Story daily review

Poetry soup

Poetry magnum opus etc

One of my goals is to read one Spanish book and one Korean book per year.

Final hint: Reading a book of poetry on the subway is a great way to pass the time. On a one hour ride or so you can get through one volume of poetry give or take.

If you have trouble finding time to read, consider taking the bus or train instead of driving.  Or listen to audio books while driving. It is amazing how much you add to your reading/listening time by doing this simple step. So put down your phone and your email/facebook or news feed or reading my blog!!!! and pick up a book of poetry or a novel instead. You will be glad you did.

Cosmos Reading List 2023

Medium

Substack

Substack Podcast

Spotify Podcast

Wattpad

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