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  • Review of Waide Riddle Power of Summer

    Review of Waide Riddle Power of Summer

    Review of Waide Riddle’s Power of Summer

    Review of Waide Riddle Power of Summer

    Review of Waide Riddle’s Power of Summer

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    Our Blues K Drama Review

    Review of  Miss Peregrine’s Home for Peculiar Series

    I received a copy of Waide Riddle’s The Power of Summer as a reward for participating in the Poetry Superhighway’s Annual poetry contest.  I also received a copy of his Children’s Horror story

    Wiade is a writer who was living in LA when he wrote these poems a few years ago.  They are evocative to look at summer in Southern California.  I am from Northern California and Summers in the Bay Area, especially in San Francisco, San Mateo, and the East Bay are cool if not cold most of the summer with the fog burning off by late afternoon when I may get to the low 80s (26 C) F but mostly hits the 70’s.  F (20 C), inland a bit, it can get hot by late afternoon, sometimes reaching over 100 degrees   (37 C)  Southern California can get a lot hotter, particularly inland as it is after all almost a desert.

    Comments on each of these poems

    Groove

    This poem is about the power of music in a dance hall nightclub, where it can sweep you away if you feel the groove.  I like the line,

    “stay away from the hates, negatives, and dirges.

    Ain’t no room for that sh*t here”

    Summer in Santa Monica

    My favorite poem is about a neighborhood if I had to live in LA I would live in.

    Like these lines

    “Santa Monica Blvd is like a catwalk with the hottest bodies in L.A.

    Damn! Damn! Damn!

    Bodies are so Fine! Tan Skin Shines!”

    The Tom Hardy Party

    The Tom Hardy poem is a poem about a friend who threw the hottest parties in LA.  I love these lines

    You’re invited to the Tom Hardy Party!

    the coolest and baddest party in L.A.

    Show your sickest, baddest, sexiest, and hottest movies

    …..

    Attitude

    that’s it

    You Got It”

    Kiss Me, Chris Pine

    a tribute to a gay lover

    best lines

    thank you for the way you make me feel

    You make the girls’ eyes flutter and the gay boys stutter

    You make the girls go “My, oh My” and the gay guys sigh

    Kiss me, Chris Pine

     Dance to the Beat of the Beach Boys

     A nice tribute to the enduring popularity of the ultimate Southern California band, the Beach Boys

    Top Down! Driving down the 101

    Never Felt So Good

    How bout you

    under the sun with my Ray Bans On

    Got my radio on and the Beach Boys on

    Not a care, winding racing through my hair

    Let’s dance to the beat of the Beach Boys”

     

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    The Power of Summer

     an ode to summer in LA

     best lines

    Imagine it! Create it! Hold on Tight to It! Cause

    Summer explodes in the City of Angels

    LA is a summer destination, a sensation. a summer

    vacation, a summer nation

     L.A. Blue

     

    another ode to the LA Vibe, but not particularly summer, just LA in general

     Best line

     “That’s  L.A. the A..blue-high. What a vibe.

    Once it hooks out, you’re part of the blue.”

     Take Me Home to Venice Beach

    Another place I would live in if I lived in LA.  I recall my few visits fondly, love the fake canals and the whole body-building scene on the beach and boardwalk.

    Favorite lines:

    “The Smell of Sage and incense are comforting on the Boardwalk

    The chants of Peace and Love give the world a chance

    The Chill vibe, the afternoon breeze against the crashing surf

    Take me home to Venice Beach”

    An Ode to a Summer’s Song

    a final ode to the summer at the end of summer

    best lines:

     “Monday, Monday, brings a close to the summer

    what a bummer”

     Waide Riddle Bio notes

    Waide Riddle is a poet, screenwriter who lives in LA. These poems were written during the COVID lockdown, recalling the summers of LA before and after the lockdowns.

    The cities of Culver City, Santa Monica, Venice, West Hollywood, Hollywood, Studio City, Silver Lake, and Los Feliz were the inspiration.

    Amazon review of the Power of Summer

    Waide Riddle, screenwriter, editorial columnist, and rather lovely chippie has written a book of poems…”The Power of Summer.”

    It’s a selection of nine poems, all summer-themed and blissfully, cheerfully rhythmic.  Anthemic chants brimming with musicality and the fever of summer potential.  Oh, how these lyrical grooves make me long for the beach.  They reek of rum cocktails, suntan lotion, and the scent of tanning skin.  Sticky ice cream hands, sandy toes, and wafts of beery breath and sea salt drying on red-tinged shoulders.

    The poems are packed with hopefulness, something we dearly need right now.  They remind us of a time when our only worry was finding somewhere to rinse off before we left the beach for the pub. Or where we left the car, or whether our friends would make it in time for high tide.  In the UK, where I am from, summer was always a glittering horizon during the many many gloomy months of rain and bitter cold.  I grew up near the coast and spent many days on beaches both sandy and pebbled, the salty Atlantic air is like the breath of god to me.  So ready these poems of Waide’s, with his own deeply personal and love-packed memories, although quite different to my own, brought back so many similar love-packed days of old.  Full of laughter, games, sunburn, and even a few tears.  But truly wonderful.

    They sing of the page, these melodic chants.  Where’s the booming bass? The spiraling guitars? The swaying bodies.  Poetry doesn’t have to be stuffy you know.  Poetry can move us in so many ways, uplift, invigorate, empower.  These poems, “Groove,” “Summer in Santa Monica,” “The Tom Hardy Party,” “Kiss Me Chris Pine” and many more are achingly LA.  Like a Hockney swimming pool, all glamorous, sultry, and bold.  If we ever get back to the beach again, with our lilts and magazines and flip-flops flapping we should chant our favorite of these collected poems like a prayer into the Pacific Ocean air, in gratitude for our lives…more, please!!!

    You can find Waide’s poems and much more of his work on his Amazon page

    www.amazon.com/author/waideriddle

    two bonus poems

     Washington Park:

    Snow swirled and spun. Falling from the gray December sky. High above the Denver skyline. Winter has its calm… floating white powder… a white Heaven. The crystals gently tickle… they pass my nose… frozen on my overcoat. Washington Park. Under the gray-white. The pines with ice-coated bark, and a light blue radiant tint hits it just right. The cold holds charm, a billowing breeze, the crackling of ice-covered trees. Fresh powdered snow. The gusts dust me with the frozen glitter. The snow falls more heavily from above… He sits next to me on the park bench. With no words, he hints. His gloved hand holds mine. Time means nothing… He is my Love. He whispers the most beautiful words, ever so quietly, into my ear. I listen. I hear his Love. His head rests on my shoulder. It’s suddenly warmer than colder. The bow of his neck is smooth… I love that part of him. The short trim of his mussed hair. The hint of the scent of Cool Water lends to this moment. He is my Love. From the gray, white, and blue… blankets cover the park in brilliant white and blue hues. Washington Park. With my Love… my muse1

     

    The Maid of Orleans:

     

     

    As I gazed at the flames of the fire my heart, with all there that day, broke – such strength could not help but inspire.

    The Maid of Orleans, a warrior spoke, her voice, a clarion call to arms, her courage, a light that never broke.

    She led the charge, she fought the harm, she stood for France, she stood for God, and she stood for all that was right and calm.

    And when the English, with their rod, did burn her at the stake, she smiled, for she knew she had done what was good.

    And so, we honor her, this child, this woman, this saint, this warrior, this Maid of Orleans, so brave and wild1

     

    Review Of Waide Riddle’s The Chocolate Man A Children’s Horror Story

    A powerful and gripping tale of old-fashioned evil monsters that terrorized a town in  New York at the turn of the 20th century.  The Monster kills children and turns them into chocolate treats he then treats other children and adults with.  The townspeople eventually defeat him, locking him up in his mansion, where he vows he will come again someday.

    The story was written in a series of free-verse stanzas that drive the story forward to its horrific ending.

    Here is Bing AI’s review

     

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    Our Blues K Drama Review

    Review of  Miss Peregrine’s Home for Peculiar Series

    I received a copy of Waide Riddle’s The Power of Summer as a reward for participating in the Poetry Superhighway’s Annual poetry contest.  I also received a copy of his Children’s Horror story

    Wiade is a writer who was living in LA when he wrote these poems a few years ago.  They are evocative to look at summer in Southern California.  I am from Northern California and Summers in the Bay Area, especially in San Francisco, San Mateo, and the East Bay are cool if not cold most of the summer with the fog burning off by late afternoon when I may get to the low 80s (26 C) F but mostly hits the 70’s.  F (20 C), inland a bit, it can get hot by late afternoon, sometimes reaching over 100 degrees   (37 C)  Southern California can get a lot hotter, particularly inland as it is after all almost a desert.

    Comments on each of these poems

    Groove

    This poem is about the power of music in a dance hall nightclub, where it can sweep you away if you feel the groove.  I like the line,

    “stay away from the hates, negatives, and dirges.

    Ain’t no room for that sh*t here”

    Summer in Santa Monica

    My favorite poem is about a neighborhood if I had to live in LA I would live in.

    Like these lines

    “Santa Monica Blvd is like a catwalk with the hottest bodies in L.A.

    Damn! Damn! Damn!

    Bodies are so Fine! Tan Skin Shines!”

    The Tom Hardy Party

    The Tom Hardy poem is a poem about a friend who threw the hottest parties in LA.  I love these lines

    You’re invited to the Tom Hardy Party!

    the coolest and baddest party in L.A.

    Show your sickest, baddest, sexiest, and hottest movies

    …..

    Attitude

    that’s it

    You Got It”

    Kiss Me, Chris Pine

    a tribute to a gay lover

    best lines

    thank you for the way you make me feel

    You make the girls’ eyes flutter and the gay boys stutter

    You make the girls go “My, oh My” and the gay guys sigh

    Kiss me, Chris Pine

     Dance to the Beat of the Beach Boys

     A nice tribute to the enduring popularity of the ultimate Southern California band, the Beach Boys

    Top Down! Driving down the 101

    Never Felt So Good

    How bout you

    under the sun with my Ray Bans On

    Got my radio on and the Beach Boys on

    Not a care, winding racing through my hair

    Let’s dance to the beat of the Beach Boys”

     

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    The Power of Summer

     an ode to summer in LA

     best lines

    Imagine it! Create it! Hold on Tight to It! Cause

    Summer explodes in the City of Angels

    LA is a summer destination, a sensation. a summer

    vacation, a summer nation

     L.A. Blue

     

    another ode to the LA Vibe, but not particularly summer, just LA in general

     Best line

     “That’s  L.A. the A..blue-high. What a vibe.

    Once it hooks out, you’re part of the blue.”

     Take Me Home to Venice Beach

    Another place I would live in if I lived in LA.  I recall my few visits fondly, love the fake canals and the whole body-building scene on the beach and boardwalk.

    Favorite lines:

    “The Smell of Sage and incense are comforting on the Boardwalk

    The chants of Peace and Love give the world a chance

    The Chill vibe, the afternoon breeze against the crashing surf

    Take me home to Venice Beach”

    An Ode to a Summer’s Song

    a final ode to the summer at the end of summer

    best lines:

     “Monday, Monday, brings a close to the summer

    what a bummer”

     Waide Riddle Bio notes

    Waide Riddle is a poet, screenwriter who lives in LA. These poems were written during the COVID lockdown, recalling the summers of LA before and after the lockdowns.

    The cities of Culver City, Santa Monica, Venice, West Hollywood, Hollywood, Studio City, Silver Lake, and Los Feliz were the inspiration.

    Amazon review of the Power of Summer

    Waide Riddle, screenwriter, editorial columnist, and rather lovely chippie has written a book of poems…”The Power of Summer.”

    It’s a selection of nine poems, all summer-themed and blissfully, cheerfully rhythmic.  Anthemic chants brimming with musicality and the fever of summer potential.  Oh, how these lyrical grooves make me long for the beach.  They reek of rum cocktails, suntan lotion, and the scent of tanning skin.  Sticky ice cream hands, sandy toes, and wafts of beery breath and sea salt drying on red-tinged shoulders.

    The poems are packed with hopefulness, something we dearly need right now.  They remind us of a time when our only worry was finding somewhere to rinse off before we left the beach for the pub. Or where we left the car, or whether our friends would make it in time for high tide.  In the UK, where I am from, summer was always a glittering horizon during the many many gloomy months of rain and bitter cold.  I grew up near the coast and spent many days on beaches both sandy and pebbled, the salty Atlantic air is like the breath of god to me.  So ready these poems of Waide’s, with his own deeply personal and love-packed memories, although quite different to my own, brought back so many similar love-packed days of old.  Full of laughter, games, sunburn, and even a few tears.  But truly wonderful.

    They sing of the page, these melodic chants.  Where’s the booming bass? The spiraling guitars? The swaying bodies.  Poetry doesn’t have to be stuffy you know.  Poetry can move us in so many ways, uplift, invigorate, empower.  These poems, “Groove,” “Summer in Santa Monica,” “The Tom Hardy Party,” “Kiss Me Chris Pine” and many more are achingly LA.  Like a Hockney swimming pool, all glamorous, sultry, and bold.  If we ever get back to the beach again, with our lilts and magazines and flip-flops flapping we should chant our favorite of these collected poems like a prayer into the Pacific Ocean air, in gratitude for our lives…more, please!!!

    You can find Waide’s poems and much more of his work on his Amazon page

    www.amazon.com/author/waideriddle

    two bonus poems

     Washington Park:

    Snow swirled and spun. Falling from the gray December sky. High above the Denver skyline. Winter has its calm… floating white powder… a white Heaven. The crystals gently tickle… they pass my nose… frozen on my overcoat. Washington Park. Under the gray-white. The pines with ice-coated bark, and a light blue radiant tint hits it just right. The cold holds charm, a billowing breeze, the crackling of ice-covered trees. Fresh powdered snow. The gusts dust me with the frozen glitter. The snow falls more heavily from above… He sits next to me on the park bench. With no words, he hints. His gloved hand holds mine. Time means nothing… He is my Love. He whispers the most beautiful words, ever so quietly, into my ear. I listen. I hear his Love. His head rests on my shoulder. It’s suddenly warmer than colder. The bow of his neck is smooth… I love that part of him. The short trim of his mussed hair. The hint of the scent of Cool Water lends to this moment. He is my Love. From the gray, white, and blue… blankets cover the park in brilliant white and blue hues. Washington Park. With my Love… my muse1

     

    The Maid of Orleans:

     

     

    As I gazed at the flames of the fire my heart, with all there that day, broke – such strength could not help but inspire.

    The Maid of Orleans, a warrior spoke, her voice, a clarion call to arms, her courage, a light that never broke.

    She led the charge, she fought the harm, she stood for France, she stood for God, and she stood for all that was right and calm.

    And when the English, with their rod, did burn her at the stake, she smiled, for she knew she had done what was good.

    And so, we honor her, this child, this woman, this saint, this warrior, this Maid of Orleans, so brave and wild1

     

    Review Of Waide Riddle’s The Chocolate Man A Children’s Horror Story

    A powerful and gripping tale of old-fashioned evil monsters that terrorized a town in  New York at the turn of the 20th century.  The Monster kills children and turns them into chocolate treats he then treats other children and adults with.  The townspeople eventually defeat him, locking him up in his mansion, where he vows he will come again someday.

    The story was written in a series of free-verse stanzas that drive the story forward to its horrific ending.

    Here is Bing AI’s review

     

    1Goodreads 2Amazon 3: Book Life

    Learn more

    1goodreads.com2amazon.com3booklife.com

    the End

     

     

  • Introducing the work of Easy Everet

    Introducing the work of Easy Everet

    Introducing the work of Easy Everet

    guest blog by Douglas Richard Colthurst

    fan story

    https://theworldaccordingtocosmos.com/Easy Everet Poetry/ ‎

    Easy Everet is one of my favorite Fan Story Poets.  Here are some of his poems.  You can read the rest of his excellent poetry on Fan Story.com

    BIO

    I am a returning FanStortrian of dubious note but usually in key. I was a relatively well read member from late in 2005 until late in 2012. I left the site in 2012 because I lost my note pad and my mind within the same time-frame. But fortunately my pad was found in September of 2017 by my erudite and (he
    makes me say this) very hunky cat. Well, that is Buddy Boy’s story but there was a great deal of what appeared to be fine grains of mica sand on the outside cover and even in-between many of the inside pages. My hunch is Buddy Boy filched my pad, hid it under his litter box, and kept it there for six years. He was never a fan of easyeverett’s poetry and would always cover his ears when I read a poem
    I’d written out loud to Sue for evaluation. Now Sue says she has liked at least two or three of the two thousand poems I have scribbled over a long life but she is a kind and caring woman.
    Buddy, however, when speaking about my poems used words like: ‘verbose, eccentric, sophomoric, outside everybody’s box not just yours, borders on dilettantism, incomprehensible, and often asked me: “Why don’t you take some time and reconnect with what you seem to need…or maybe your friends on FS need or maybe what I need. You’re looking a little worse for the writing.”
    Buddy Boy swears he found my note pad inside a large volume of William Blake’s great poetic opus entitled
    “Paradise Lost” which he was rereading at the time. I left it at that. My wife insists my mind had escaped its cranial cover long before I thought it was lost. Like in 1970 when she took pity on a recovering 60’s summer of love child who she thought was really ‘far-out’ and since she had just fired the Catholic Church and was
    under a ‘lost my faith but found my hippie’ period, she married me. Not to go any deeper but because of a few things in my life that probably would never have been resolved or confronted, only buried by self-medicating with one or more of my many unique pharmaceutical and beverage combinations invented for…for swallowing. Sue saved my life for good or bad or worse and that is a simple fact and super example and perfect definition of love going both ways at the same time.

    During my first poetic journey through FanStory heaven, I achieved the acquired the Polar Bear status in 2006 and was, for me, rather well received by almost a dozen other writers and poets throughout the
    rest of my tenured service to FS. I returned to FS when I realized that if Sue was correct
    about my mind being missing since ’70, then it did not play a part in my exit from the site
    in 2012, just an overreaction to the emotional loss of my note pad. Below is an old profile which
    has too much bio and not enough about this site so skip it if you too have lost your mind or just got bored
    reading what you already have struggled to finish. Enjoy FanStory and especially the FanStorian scribes who truly respect the nature and beneficial purpose of artistic effort and endeavors. Good luck to all. easyeverett

    I am a formalist poet who tends toward the classic poetry of old but also have a true fondness for the beat
    poets of the fifties and early sixties.

    I write on any subject that pops or invades my mind. I review to improve the prose or poem I am reviewing.
    I utilize the cumulative knowledge gained by fifty years of writing for pleasure and as a professional
    medical researcher. I attended the Writer’s Workshop at the University of Iowa in Iowa City
    and after my return from S.E. Asia I graduated from Stanford University, located in Palo Alto
    California. I now concentrate on going to bed and getting up.

    easyeverett

    A 2024 Reminder

     

    when power proves the object of one’s lust
    abuse of power loses people’s trust.
    a wise man always leads from certainty,
    as grains of sand can stand an angry sea.when people are obliged to choose with care
    their choice creates a consequence they bear.
    an errant choice could bring catastrophe
    that threatens to displace democracy.the influence of personality
    becomes political reality,
    revealing no intrinsic skill to lead
    but finds the perfect kind of mind to feed.

    and when a candidate might elevate
    to win election to a higher state
    then all new actives must stand for review
    and that ensures no error will get through.

     

     

    No One There

     

    the world is running out of time
    and soon the losing bells will chime
    a fascist movement everywhere
    but no one was there to care.our leaders trade integrity
    for lies and false reality
    what was our down is now our up
    the saucer has become a cupthe politicians talk big talk
    but are afraid to walk the walk
    we lost what once we did believe
    that no one now cares to retrieve

    the truth has now become a lie
    and no one seems to question why
    our pride and honor flew away
    replaced on Insurrection day

    where have our moral standards gone
    along with righteous men who thought strong
    a country not of men but of laws
    now cheers to the neofascist cause

    this Madisonian democracy
    may soon be lost to history
    not from external foreign force
    but autocrats within of course

    the fascists first take over schools
    and then ban books that flaunt their rules
    then silence becomes manifest
    as protest too is laid to rest

    extremists say that history
    when taught has no validity
    so, they revise and reinvent
    as truth is twisted, lost, and bent

     

    Landing In Vietnam (1966)

    I felt the reverse thrusters kick in on the C-5 Galaxy transport
    and I awoke from a deep and needed sleep as the plane began
    its long descent into Cue San Air Base, Vietnam.

    I gazed out the small portal window to see below me the biggest swath of green I ever imagined existed on earth. If I did not know the purpose of my involuntary visitation to this green landscape, it would appear I was about to land in Eden or a close cousin to that place where man’s original sin began and now continues to flourish within a divided and war-weary land.

    I’m starting to believe third-world countries, at war, act like a magnet to the United States because it gives our politicians another chance to play the US as ‘great savior’ or ‘good shepherd’ or in 1950s tv western lingo, simply the “good guy” – Cheyenne Body style. But at that particular moment I was a long way from watching Clint Walker, as Cheyene Body, mosey across my tv screen while making me and most other men feel less a man than before we started watching that show and most women (I assume) agreeing that our feelings were right on target. I wondered if maybe Clint would take some time off from strutting his physical largess on tv and come over to this recently unknown place, now fighting an unknown war for an unknown reason (which is not unlike most fucking wars) for an unknown length of time and ply his Cheyene Body magic where the good guys, when identified, would be sure to win and nobody (like on tv back then) would ever die but maybe, just maybe, get minor wounds that never kept them out of next week’s heroic episode.

    I started thinking about other tv shows I would miss during my involuntary stay when I realized the plane had landed and I was rudely ordered out of the plane’s rear exit and into the suffocating heat and humidity of what then was the unfamiliar, little known country of Vietnam that over time would become the too well known country with shared history we just cannot forget or forgive or erase from our guilty consciousness and I, for one, hope we never do.

     

    We Are…

     

    We are the silent and banished,
    shadow lepers who walk among
    the unforgiving innocent with
    luminous sores.We are hieratic stones
    that mark a trail to divinity,
    unaware of alternative paths.

    We are the nightmare
    and cuirass of your
    terminal souls.

    We are the delicate,
    immortelles flowers
    of creation’s jewellery
    and dwell within
    the mouldering caverns
    of apocalyptic chaos.

    We reject gods because
    they reject our sacerdotal
    dominion over gods.

    We are the magical
    diseased who feed upon
    the blue-burn fire of stars.

    We are the watchers
    of the withered minds
    who try and quantify
    our grandiosity through
    their mediocrity.

    We are pre-eminent
    progeny of parsimonious
    preternatural wombs.

    We are magmatic, quantum
    lepton neutrinos of sub-atomic
    galaxies where altruistic Eros
    regenerates the living force of life.

    We are the you in us and the us in you.

    We are infinite truth.

    We are!

    Man’s Truth

     

    all wars we have fought
    all men we have shot
    creating a lifetime of histories
    reflected in mankind’s failed memories
    that achieved not one thing man sought
    yet defining man’s life of indecencies

    Not The Time Of Fire

     

    To live the longer life aspire
    to lengthen out the game.
    Yet life is not the time of fire
    but time left to the flame.Some ancient prophets lived long lives
    as did the passionate.
    Yet still not one of them survives
    within that congregate.To focus on eternity
    and journeys after death
    is but a sad fraternity
    awaiting their last breath.

    To focus on tomorrow’s dark,
    is one more second lost
    to every moment we don’t mark;
    and see how high the cost.

     

     

    Eternal Hate

     

     

    From the fierey depths of eternal hate

    to a wandering Roman, in the days of yore,

    the simplicity of our forseen fate

    is beheld within an evil core.

     

    The brooks flow with the blood of the past

    and the senseless things we do today,

    make the brooks flow and the blood last

    for life’s relived and the past shall stay.

     

    The immensity of mass destruction lives on

    yet the earth concedes to turn round the sun,

    though we remember those days yet gone

    bur forget the words of every one.

     

    Death upon an unseen hill

    placid happenings of yester year,

    this evil has us at its will

    yet, with confident madness,

    we have no fear.

     

     

     

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    I am a returning
    FanStortrian of
    dubious note but
    usually in key. I was
    a relatively well read
    member from late in
    2005 until late in 2012.
    I left the site in 2012 because
    I lost my note pad and
    my mind within – more…

    The Yin And Yang Of War

     

    My longest stay had been a year
    Of grinding time in lowest gear.
    Asylums say the stay today
    Is but three months then on your way.So please don’t ask me why oh why
    Do mad old ones choose youth to die?
    For I’ve learned not one single grain
    Insightful to my own insane.But madness dragged me back inside
    To share black air wrapped suicide’
    When my dear friend, though mad at best,
    Chose 42 for his last rest.

    Lifelong depression won the day
    That “black dog” stole his soul away.
    And then another friend from Nam
    When ten years home was one night gone.

    In Nam with pistol worn in sight
    He’d fly his Hueys to the fight
    To pluck up wounded stuck so dire
    Then fly too high for hostile fire.

    No matter when or where they fall,
    Their names belong upon the wall.
    How many Vets their balls still bent
    Died prone alone on cold cement?

    The naked act of will to kill
    Brought some men home for killin’ still,
    Like those who went with troubled souls
    Found napalm lies too full of holes.

    A gallant soldier fights till dead
    Too often for past lies he’s fed.
    Now who among you disagrees
    Wars fill our horrid histories.

    No matter where or what you do
    Some leaders find a war for you
    To fight until that war is done,
    A war thier lies had first begun.

    As we leave every century
    Still bleeding with hostility
    Can insights deep within the Yin
    Begin the Yang’s defeat of sin?

    Did I First Ride The Wind

     

    And once upon a journey made
    did I first ride the wind
    far from the scented verdant glade
    with mainsail fully trimmed.

    The salted sea is memory,
    my days of sail long passed,
    where death was bound by destiny
    to vacant shores so vast.

    I feel a surge of heat within
    this aged shell so cold;
    a mind and body born to win
    whose beauty has grown old.

    But once abundant youth did thrive
    on passion’s purest dreams
    where eros brought the truth alive
    as Siren’s sung its themes.

    A gift the gods cannot evade
    and I shall not rescind
    when once upon a journey made
    did I first ride the wind.

    Not On Her Best Night

     

     

     

     

    The Story:

    ragged faded

    lady hoarder,

    dumpster-diving

    diva boarder,

    dancin’ to the tune

    of her Dandelion Wine.

    milky-eyed maiden,

    peddles paper posies,

    masticating carnivore,

    toothless, useless whore.

    not on her best night!

    not anymore!

    acclimated alleyways,

    rodents without fear,

    muddle-minded Faustian ,

    soul redeeming martyr –

    thirty-seventh year.

    The Memories:

    broken boned beauty

    forged in her mind,

    conscientious duty

    lost to time.

    could have been

    a skater,

    rockefeller rink,

    sooner came later,

    locked and loaded link.

    pride of Arizona,

    class of sixty-one,

    a devotee of luna,

    loves her remy rum.

    many bitter winters,

    bitter winter winds,

    sliced her like a knife slice,

    bled her bone thin.

    The Story:

    gave away her gravity,

    east L.A.

    weighted down reality

    roles she plays.

    saddle-strapped sad hag

    gone insane,

    never gonna’ lose

    ’cause she’s never in the game.

    always aware where the

    light lays low to the ground

    livin’ in a clap-trap

    jingle-jangle town.

    runs for the shade

    when the sun goes down;

    safety in crazy,

    crazy shades and shadow

    hides her braided hair

    and her Royal golden crown.

    salts of lithium

    took away her name;

    doesn’t even know

    who the hell to blame.

    wants to be codified,

    once and for all,

    as prophets once prophesied –

    another Jackie O.

    with her hag-bag shop rags

    ready to go.

    time is always lazy for a lady goin’ crazy!!

    midnight, brain-drain, middle of the boulevard,

    ragged lady bag-hag screamin’ out her rage.

    The Lady Speaks:

    HEY YOU!

    up there with your pixilated palindromes,

    sippin’ fresh-dipped sewer juice

    and french champagne – you blue-blooded, high-borns,

    listen to the tale that I wail at you.

    i’m a sack-cloth, busted, shackled crusted scab,

    gonococcal wet-brain – slippin’ on the ledge

    of pain on pain, while livin’ on the edge

    in the whorin’ pourin’ rain. God died, I cried,

    now i’m lookin’ for some gain.

    leave your flush plush penthouse high-flying life;

    see your bleeding sister, see your bleeding wife.

    that’s right, once a wife, mother to your kids.

    your kids are gettin’ shifty, siftin’ on the street;

    private school, brittle-veined, maggot-tagged gods,

    waitin’ for the reaper with the universal odds.

    i’m brain-drained, insane, dissipated plain,

    a bucket full of truth even Jesus wouldn’t claim!

    so crucify your comfort, your gentrified name,

    then bring it to the street bitch let me see your shame

     

     

     

    Black Phantom Shadows

     

     

    black phantom shadows –
    (human beings)
    aromatic ghosts float
    but rarely are they seen

    check out the scent on the putrid, muted
    breeze – busted-up blood tragedy – many
    people trapped – flat in the middle of a Kafka dream

    people seem fine with the all night whine – the night sirens
    sound like Donizetti’s Borgeia in C – street trolls lose their
    funky-monkey mind – won’t listen to a melody in any other key

    maximize a siren to its highest boost –
    then play that wail in C – it soon will find a
    place to roost – as people love to listen to
    a loud melodic melody in that magic key

    mighty mister-dumpsters filled to brim tonight –
    as nighgtime dippers quickly dip and slip from sight
    while safer, hipper dippers dip at morning light

    but crack-head harlots sometimes skip the dip –
    the appetite is not in sight when smokin’ crack
    becomes a dieter’s delight

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    little Lizzie crack-head takes a dive – in dumpster number nine –
    lunch in the city – be a pity not to dine – in a loaded dipsy-dumpster
    where the food tastes fine – but Lizzie leaned too far – she fell right in –
    but not a hungry harlot at the bottom of the bin -’cause squirmy little wormies
    ate Lizzie and her sin

    bright badge’s shine
    on a Saturday night
    uninformed authority
    on famine and blight
    people never look
    a beat cop in the eye
    no matter what the truth
    or street wise lie
    street people know
    the bureaucratic game
    are dirty little shake-downs
    of multitudinal shame
    you don’t talk to cops
    you don’t give your name
    you never let a cop
    be director of the game

    day to day gravity can cause great pain – on paralyzed,
    gutter-rutted people in the rain – better stand guard
    over precious cityways – Mammon’s dimmin’ down –
    seen its better days – when the harshest haze of poverty
    was hidden in the maze of interlocking alleyways where
    shrouded safe in darkness – the furry vermin plays

    Tangled Shadows

     

    To bleed all black or bleed all white
    are bitter breaths upon life’s trail,
    so, I bleed right between the light
    as tangled shadows fade to pale.My body wrapped in muslin grays
    (Confusing to the muse of light,)
    all curled like cotton-cloud bouquets
    to hide my rise of pure delight.

    We seek to feel the force of free
    (intuitive instruction sought);
    in compliment simplicity
    that rids the grid of complex thought.

    Words formed upon an empty sheet
    will soon become an anthem sung;
    refuse confusion’s new elite
    when jingle-jangle bells are rung.

    Seductions by reduction make
    a break for ultra-common place
    where wizards claim they are not fake
    but hide their thin-skinned, bitter face.

    Go out among the multitudes,
    absorb the truth imbued in man.
    Feel free to travel latitudes
    that stray away from your first plan.

    The muscled hustler finds his grooves
    within the sin of mighty mind,
    accepted though infected, proves
    the mighty mind is hard to find.

    Become a lover of the light,
    unwrap all straps around the truth.
    Praise purity of common sight,
    ignite it in your troubled youth.

    Our loss of liberty has made
    another perfect tragedy,
    where lazy, hazy, days of shade
    corrupted man’s reality.

    This bitter fit mythology
    incites until the light is lost;
    dissect each bit of piety,
    begin to finalize its cost.

    And here I leave you with good will
    until the song of love, we sing,
    will spark that spark inside man still
    and silver bells of peace shall ring.

    As Fascists Threaten Still

     

    The One who had the truth entombed
    resides inside each lie.
    The lie becomes the truth consumed
    through One truth born on high.The land turns dark though bright the light
    as all traditions die.
    Land once so rich now land of blight
    as fear pollutes the sky.

    Minds great in girth search out the worm,
    infectious like a plague,
    that makes all human tissues squirm:
    great minds can only beg.

    And as we lose democracy
    we also lose our will.
    The answer clear in history
    as fascists threaten still.

     

    Two Dream-Lovers

     

    Magnificent, her body soars in dreams,
    Long braided hair streams freely with the wind;
    Young Aphrodite rides night’s silver beams
    While raiment thin reveals white lambent skin.Erotic visions of seduction rise
    From this chimera of conduction’s heat
    And soon my head is filled with lustful cries
    Of two dream-lovers making love complete.

    Entwined we float above the sea below,
    Her rhythmic vigor vital in her hips
    As we sail over Isles of long ago;
    Dark eyes invite my mouth to greet her lips.

    When I awake I smell the briny air
    Enriched with scent of musk dream-lovers share.

     

    Another Broken Man

     

    now here I stand another broken man
    whose love of life laments obscurity.
    the product of ambition’s naive plan
    reached in and stole my soul’s integrity.I am the one who can’t become an us:
    no flesh–no blood–no break of fast to feed;
    a lustful trust once wrapped in omnibus,
    ground down to shallow graven slave in need.disgusted by how degredation days
    laid wasted on the taste of indiscreet;
    my soul the blackest hole from blacker ways,
    confronts chronicity of incomplete.

    my flesh is filled and frought with foul disease;
    offensive was my life to thine own eyes
    whose seen me sail both clean and filthy seas
    where faith can fill or empty bigotries.

    the story of a glory gone insane;
    a genius so sublime in youthful prime
    before the days communed with pure cocaine
    while they did steal the tick and tock of time.

    there is no way to spread a dreaded blame
    excused are those accused or left to find
    I say I loved to play the changing game;
    eclectic change to corners of my mind.

    certified a crazy kind of critter
    tested mess I do believe corrected
    bitter is a life of hazy glitter
    choices blurred by choices I neglected.

    I’m jonesin’ in the center of a city
    while waiting on my powdered China-white.
    my man must understand he’s dealin’ pity
    or sick I’m going to be throughout the night.

    I think I see my hero now is coming
    like a pimp he’s dressed in blackest leather
    tripping proud with lanky strides and humming
    tunes he writes but just can’t keep together.

    I’m watchin’ death come walkin’ straight at me
    and I don’t think or blink a catious eye
    but hand the Ferryman his feral fee:
    relieve and leave without a shout ‘goodbye.’

    my body broke and beaten now for certain;
    too much junk keeps suckin out my bones.
    I think I see the final call and curtain,
    the God I owe is callin’ in his loans.

    it was my hope someday I would connect
    dramatic angels with my own desires,
    but what should I, who did deny, expect?
    I touch too much the heat of madness fires.

    I sit inside the sacred Shaman ring,
    where apparitions dervish dance around
    but what the Shaman needs I could not bring;
    my last was lost my first was never found

    I traveled every twisted rut and road
    that zigs and zags across my mottled map
    and every road became an endless load
    and every stop became the same old trap.

    I’ve melllowed with the magic mountain mushroom
    with the mystic natives from Peru.
    made love in huts to ladies in full bloom
    while glitter ghosts played rock and roll Kazoo.

    and now I’m running full capacity
    while hoping I’m not heading for a fall
    but showing off my great alacrity
    before I hear the cry “last curtain call.”

    I hope to find a cheap discreet hotel,
    try kickin’ my addictions very quick
    while risin’ up and out of my own hell,
    affixed to such affliction makes one sick.

    then I will join a mighty minstrel show,
    while going up to greet the nearest star;
    find something true and new that I don’t know
    and see if I have time to raise the bar.

    my future vision of reality,
    infused by figment fire but never there –
    a future framed without validity
    or is there ever anyone aware?

    one way I know to beat the blues today
    just fire up Langston Hughes and boogie beat
    but I’m not breakin’ any news your way
    we know just when and where like minded meet.

    I slip and slide while runnin’ in my rut
    with that old monkey clinging to my back.
    I am the jester with a stuttered strut,
    who lives his life from pack to glassine pack.

    I guess it’s time to slip away and leave –
    been here and there so now I guess I’ll go
    and find some new creative ways to weave
    synaptic threads for changing what I know.

     

    End